Reviews for Fragments
CountessDracula chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
This is great,awesome and fantastic!
Itsumo chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
This was written pretty well. It made me tear up at the end. (I hope you don't mind if I rant from here on out) Anyway, I know Shirley was sad about her father's death, but how was Zero (or Lelouch) supposed to know that her father was there. It was all a coincidence. Lelouch didn't even know about that mans death by the unnatural landslide until after Shirley told him. I know her judgement was clouded by her sorrow, but she still should've been able to reason out that there was no way Zero could've possibly known about her father. Sorry about the rant. It just gets on my nerves sometimes. Anyway, this was very well written.
Reality Tales chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
This is fantastic ! Can't wait for your next update ! :D
Kirinthor chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
i really liked this, it really reminds u of lelouch and shirleys relationship, well done :D