|Reviews for Three Olives, Please|
| MsRenesmeeCarlie chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
It's a really good story :)
i like the way you write :)
Have you ever thought about making an EPOV?!
I would love it if you did, and I'm sure I'm not the only one! :)
| sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
awww fab story loved it lol
| Sassyvampmama chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
| KimiD chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
I like this one too. Sometimes I just love to read nothing but o/s stories. They are all inclusive and you get a quick fix for an HEA without weeks of angst thrown in the mix. You have some really great o/shots. Fun, quirky, snarky and they just make you happy!
| maru1824 chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
the lemon...love it!
| ManiacMotherland chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
You are really improving as a writer. I'm proud of you.
| leadevan chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
please write more... this was amazing
| Pandora's Box Is Heavy chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
OmGEEZEL ladybell - Play with words and your name get it? haha it's 1:23 and I was supposed to be off for two days but the new girl's elderly neighbor died in a freak accident so I'm covering for her.. is it bad when you call your coworker and she's at a karaoke bar beyond tipsy? Dude I drank way to much and answered the phone while my best friend did her fantastic version of "Like a virgin" ugh I'm probably never going to live that down.. but yeah I should be sleeping so that when I wake up I can run some of the alcohol out of my system before I work but .. I just happened to be searching through stuff and realized you wrote this and freaked out a little.
How could I not read it? Hmm
Let me just say... HOT-NESS seriously I thought virgins wrote the best lemons but da-yum girl you wrote the hell out of that lemon haha. Yes I'm still drunk so you get a nice rambling drunken review.
I TOTALLY GET THREE OLIVES IN MY MARTINI TOOOO SO LONG AS IT'S GREYGOOSE.. I'M AN EXPENSIVE DRINKER HEHE.
um let's see.. I hate Lauren.. I can't have her as a good person in any of my stories because I hated her little itty bitty part of Twilight and really want to know why she chopped all her hair off during the summer because I think she decided to come out of the closet and was the butch..
Jesus let me get back to the review.
Edward spent his vacation thinking about her .. AWE.
When my girlfriends and I went off for our Savannah trip we were all freaking out when our cellphones wouldn't get reception on that road before Riverstreet and then we got crunk and forgot all about calling our boys we'd left at home haha..
I am sooo proud of this story and how in there hell is there only three reviews?
I should probably go take some advil and go to sleep but I can't get this stupid song out of my head :( lol I don't know who sings it but I'll probably remember the second I press submit lol
Oh yeah.. the word FERAL is used in one of the paragraphs and had me giggling so hard Jon smacked me with his pillow because he has to work at six.. i had to explain to my mother's friend the other night what feral meant because she didn't understand what her daughter was saying about her.. it's a long story and I'm too drunk.. this review has taken me literally like ten minutes to write haha.
I'll tell you about it later.
I love your Bella and her clumsy ass hahaha.. seriously I almost pictured myself doing it but a snaughed (snort laughed) and put that to rest because I don't want to get hit with pillows again... before you call me a wuss they are down pillows and weigh like twenty pounds so they are friggin heavy.
LOVE THE STORY I HAVE TO GO TO SLEEP BEFORE I GO EAT THE ENTIRE CONTENTS OF MY FRIDGE :)
LUV YAH BYE
WRITE MORE SOON.. even though I haven't had time to check out anything.. you could have like a billion and one stories written .. I'll look tomorrow when I get off work
I apologize for any typos or incoherent sentences this review may be riddled with... the Firefox thingy sort of fixes most mistakes but.. you know haha
| aimCULLENee chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
awww that was a sweet O/S
| twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Loved it! I'm glad he finally told her his feelings
| April Luna chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
YAM YAM, HOT HOT. Write more.