Reviews for Pokemon Adventures: Where Legends Cross
King Pichu chapter 10 . 4/18
You flopped green and blue's names
King Pichu chapter 2 . 4/17
uhh... the girl in the diamond/pearl arc is named platinum, not platina
Eh chapter 29 . 2/21
You've forgotten that red was poisoned. I recommend editioning it in to dramatasize the next chapter and kill him or disable him. I was disappointed at that.
xSKILLETFANx chapter 11 . 5/17/2015
This story is incredible! Last chapter and this chapter were the best so far! White meeting Blue, and now what happened with Platinum and Crystal. I am so excited to continue reading this fantastic story!
Zambizi223 chapter 7 . 4/9/2015
I like this story so far.
PokemonTrainer12 chapter 4 . 2/6/2015
Amazing. I love how you write each chapter! It's like each one is thought out, planned, and written again and again until it is as good as it can possibly get. This is going to be a really good story!
Sanokal chapter 35 . 10/18/2014
Though it was odd reading this after Black and White 2 it was still a fantastic read. I can't help but wonder...I know there was no inkling of them back then, but I wonder which Mega Evolutions would get used...
But I digress. I'm sure that you don't need me to tell you that this is excellent, and I'm looking forward to reading the next part.
Guest chapter 35 . 8/16/2014
OMG that was awesome! Thank you for writing such a great fanfic! It's the best I've read in along time. I hope you keep up the great work and write more fantastic fics! :)
MirageDream chapter 35 . 5/9/2014
Wow what an incredible ride this first arc was! I definitely thought this was well written, and everyone seemed very in character, I'm impressed. I love the plot as well and everything that came with it. As I was reading, though, I did notice some grammar mistakes and misspell words, but those are few and far in between. I'm definitely reading on to the next arc and hoping to see more incredibleness!
PokemonTrainer12 chapter 3 . 4/16/2014
Aaack, I hope that was Saph's Wailord.
(That reminds me, I once met a Shiny Wailord...)
PokemonTrainer12 chapter 2 . 4/16/2014
Okay, I forgot to Review on the first chapter, so I'll review here! So far, this is awesome!
Second, I just want to share a little story...
Well, I read part of this FanFiction a year or so back, before I made an account. I thought (and still do) it was really, really, amazing- all the Dex Holders together like that! I recall beginning with Chapter 29 (eheheheheh...). Anyway, several days ago I decided to try and find this story, and I did! I was absolutely ecstatic! :D
All I want to say is, thank you. And now I can read the whole story from start to finish!
Ali-kun chapter 35 . 1/20/2014
Meh, too lazy to log in.. XP Wow, you just got me to like Girantina a lot more! :D
Stashka chapter 35 . 1/16/2014
Yaaaahooooo! I loved the whole arc, and how you gave every character their protagonism when needed! By the way... Where are all the other legendaries? Nevermind! I'll see them probably on the next arc...
Stashka chapter 29 . 1/15/2014
I guess Giovanni saves Silver? I mean, easy to see that coming from his father and also cuz what else could be expected?
Stashka chapter 26 . 1/15/2014
Queen for the win! I loved the piece of song and you just made me start singing it xD. Also, i know its not the right chapter totalk of this, but i love how you made Silver an infiltrate ninja, and also more personality than in other fanfics, where he doesnt even remotely do anything apart from being there. Also i love how you put surge and sabrina like: hey! My former enemies, do you want a ride to n's castle? LOL but the fact that they are there is good enough :). And also, you have epicly overpowerd yellow, but i like it. Also you overpowered her butterfree cuz she is 18 but still can fly with butterfree? Oh well, its cool and it fits...
Also to mention this as my favourite fanfic and the most ellaborated i Have seen up untill now. Keep it up with the epicness!

Pd:RED go faking appear in the story already!
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