Reviews for The bodyguard
chocovic-chu chapter 8 . 11/14/2015
Whaaat? How come you ended the story just like that? I want more dramaaa! But, fine, "use your interpretation" that is . . . *sigh*
Anyway, I've been recently into Hetalia through "AsaKiku" tags from tumblr and find my self in love with Japan! So this is my first fanfiction from the fandom and shipping! Nooo, am I so laaate! Laaame! Yet, this story is so loveable despite the vague ending . . . I'll read more AsaKiku, then!
Thanks for sharing!
iluvfandoms1 chapter 8 . 9/13/2014
Alright then wasn't expecting that ending. I mean it was obvious Artie was going to be mad at kiku but himxalice was surprising to me. Other than that it tugged at all the right feels and I loved it.
theSardonyx chapter 8 . 6/11/2014
You wrote Seme!Japan for am AsaKiku fic. Thanks.

Write on.!
JayP.H chapter 8 . 10/16/2013
This. THIS STORY. RIGHT HERE. IS BEYOND AMAZING. IT SHOULD BECOME A NOVEL AND I WOULD DEFINETLY BUY IT. This right here is BY FAR one of the very top best fan-fictions I have ever laid eyes on and would recommend it to ANYONE who would like to go on a fairy tale adventure. Its beautiful and magnificent
Spica-san Dee chapter 8 . 3/17/2013
So touching, and I keep crying at some point. Maybe I am a crybaby, but oh well, this is a great story anyway. Such a nice idea wrapped into marvelous plot. The ending is beautiful, however, I felt bad for Alfred. He'll have two fathers and he'll grow with thoughts like 'OMG mah dad'za bi.' I don't feel sorry for Alice, dunno why, but this doesn't mean I hate the ending. I think it's so romantic, knight and princess stuff

Gonna fave this!
- Spica Dee
Yue Sai chapter 8 . 12/17/2012
I was really looking for some good Asakiku fics since they're hard to when I stumbled upon this one. I will admit, in the beginning I did not have high hopes, but as the story progressed, I have really come to love it. I like how you made photography a hobby for Kiku, and I also enjoyed the fairy tail parts in this story as well. As much as I feel badly for Alfred and Alice, I really did like the ending. Thank you for writing the story as I found it to be a lovely past time. I hope to read something else of yours soon. Take care and thanks again.
Chichita chapter 8 . 10/15/2012
This was such a lovely story. Took me a while to read but I'm happy I was able to finish it even though is midnight lol.

The story is unique and I love the way you slowly made the characters fall in love. Each chapter was very well written and I must confess I almost wanted to tear you apart when chapter 7 ended, it made me sad especially what Arthur did. But I'm happy it ended somewhat of a happy ending. I too hope both of them find the happiness they deserve

I'm such a sucker for Kiku. X3 great story, hope you will consider a sequal. Asakiku 4evar 3
Guest chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
awwwwww this is soooo asdsadfbkJDBF i don't knowwww but it made me squee many times... chapter!
LadyArn chapter 4 . 7/4/2012
I'm loving this so far! Usually I don't review on finished pieces until the llast chapter, but I felt I should mention this:

Here in England, college doesn't refer to a private school. Confusingly, a private school is called a public school here. Our education system is a lot different to many other countries - we don't work by the grade systems.
You start at Preschool at around three years old. At four, you start Key Stage One (Primary School). At seven, you start Key Stage Two (Middle School). At eleven, you begin Key Stage Three (Upper or Secondary School).
At around sixteen, you leave compulsary education. Here you either begin college - either a Technical College to study practical subjects like hairdressing, or a Sixth Form College to study academic subjects like maths or psychology - or get an apprenticeship to learn a trade.
Most college courses last for two years, after which you can either try and get a job, or go to university for a degree or a diploma.

All education below college level is free. You only pay for education if you attend a public school, and when you attend university (except if you choose a medical course, and then the National Health Service pays for it).

Sorry, just thought you might like to know.

If you wonder why I know this, I'm a twenty year old English girl, I went to a normal school, a sixth form college, and currently attending a nursing course at university - I've never paid a days tuition in my life, and my student loan repayments will be less than a quarter what my friends will pay!
Lunetastar chapter 8 . 5/30/2012
at ch 7, i will admit...i stared cursing you. then i finished chapter 8 and it was an amazing ending! i absolutly loved it! they way you captured their personalities was awe inspiring. i really wish i could write like you write.

again, i loved this story :)
xdreamsxinxmyxheart chapter 8 . 3/22/2012
Hi! Just wanted to say I really enjoyed this. There were some grammatical errors (but who cares?). The only thing that got me was the time period. At first I thought it was Victorian Era then there started to be cameras and airports and I was like " Wait, what?" Σ(・・;But it was great nevertheless. Have a good day! (_)
Dr. Dee Da Dee chapter 8 . 2/2/2012
OMGOMGOMG I only just read this, in one sitting, but just OMG that was the sweetest thing i ever read! I loved this story so much thankyou for writing it X333

The whole thing of them being together since childhood and when they nearly kissed hhhnnnng XD basically i loved it, and will now cease my meaningless jabbering XD

(the only other thing i will say, is that I am British and I've never heard a private school be called a college before. I mean, heck, i only just joined college this year, and im 17 XD) again this was awesome X333
ivyterasu chapter 8 . 11/2/2011
i the story! TTwTT one of the bests i have read! w keep with the good work!
LadyKnightRose chapter 8 . 8/28/2011
This made me cry! ( In a good way! ) 5/5 stars!
Selinawen chapter 8 . 7/16/2011
I've finally finished this story today, XD! I don't have enough words to describe my feelings because this isn't really the type of stories I usually read... But though stuff are confusing due to that reason, I managed to enjoy it throughout I laughed at how Ivan always seems to be the bad guy in a few Asakiku fics I've read including this one (but can't complain since I love making Alfred the bad guy), Since I love Russia, Japan and England equally in my #1 spot, I would like to see a story where they are friends for once one day, haha

In all, I feel that the description really blows my mind away and I feel that I could never describe things to this extent, but then again, I'm not too good in description to begin with so...

When I read the end of chapter 7, I go like... "whyyyy!" But at the end where they finally got together, I can't help but smile reading it, and I'm still smiling now XD!

I like it that you included Vash and Elise, seeing as they are my 2nd Hetalia OTP after Asakiku, it just makes me smile to see them there :) Actually...they are the first Hetalia pairing I ever liked, but Asakiku is too strong for them :p

I know I talk a lot...sorry, I've been going out of topic a lot... all I want to say that this is an awesome story and I hope to read more of your fanfics in future _

Oh and...if you are wondering who I am...the first word before 'Matantei' in my username shall give you a clue...I should really chang my pen name to something regconisable though... More'm on dA and you got me into tumblr...I think that's enough clues for now XD!
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