|Reviews for UFO: The Hot Seat|
| Matthew White chapter 2 . 4/15/2011
Upgrades to SHADO, I love it! I did the same thing in a couple of my storylines. I enjoyed Ed's conversation with Virginia, as well as Alec and Paul. Leave it to Virginia to ask a difficult question, that's Ginny!
| Matthew White chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
You've got an interesting plot working here. I think the longer first chapter works much better. I agree with the SHADO Librarian, about the funding, in fact I wouldn't even specify an amount, as all the reader needs to know is that Straker is getting funding. Military hardware is very expensive. In 1986, one F-14 Tomcat cost 30 million, that's one aircraft. I do like the plot so far.
| Shado Librarian chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Interesting start. You might want to check your spelling and numbers, though. $5000 isn't a lot of money - I think there are some zeros missing.