Reviews for Origin
Slothy Girl chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Aw- poor Eugene! he tried so hard, but his "friends" are obviously an idiotic- back stabbing bunch, so of course they "tattle" on him *pouts* at least we all know he gets the better deal in the end with his lovely wife :D
NikkyPickles chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
That was amazing. It was incredibly well thought out and flowed brilliantly. Apart from a few tiny grammatical slips (which I hesitate to point out, but I figured I couldn't let you get away with writing a PERFECT story!) this is one of the best stories I have ever read. Fabulous and favourited
ida4444 chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Very descriptive and an awesome plot. I love it. :)

Don't worry about the chase scene. That was actually pretty good. :)

Keep writing!