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| vampiregirl2014 chapter 6 . 6/30/2012
Amen girl. If ir not mature enough and complain about the stories that r rated M THEN DONT FUC*ING READ THEM! IT HAS RATED M ON THERE FOR A REASON! AND IF I RECALL U WAS U FANFICTION WHO PUT THE RATTIG BUTTON ON THERE FPR PEOPLE TO USE AND FOR THOSE PEOPLE WHO DONT LIKE VIOLENCE! SO PEOPLE START READING THE RATING AND STOP BIT*HING!
| Sami365 chapter 6 . 6/22/2012
I totally agree, things are just getting plain ridiculous on here. I'm gonna check out that website. Lets hope that things get better on here.
| BookGuru chapter 5 . 1/31/2012
| VampireAcademyRocks0726 chapter 5 . 7/27/2011
OMG awesome story... i hope u can continue soon :)
| The.R.Gets.The.D chapter 4 . 7/17/2011
Awsome story, I love it!
| krazygurl54321 chapter 3 . 6/26/2011
I was peeking out through my fingers good story
| Dimka's chick chapter 2 . 6/23/2011
Wonder what the verdict is
| PRINCESSKATERINAHATHAWAY chapter 5 . 6/22/2011
love it hope you get better update soon
| Removed 321 chapter 5 . 6/22/2011
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww get well soon! and UD as soon as u can! :D
| Nicia chapter 5 . 6/22/2011
Awww I hope you get better soon sweetie! xx
| XxxLostOnexxX chapter 4 . 6/11/2011
Good job! keep it up and update soon :)
| booksloveandcoffee chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
It's good but it could be so much better.
You might want to get a beta, someone that proof reads your chapters to check for spelling, grammar, and provides words or phrases that sound better than what you have. Poor spelling and grammar can be what turns away a potential reader.
You also should consider spacing out your paragraphs because having one big blob can really turn off a lot of readers, which I'm sure you don't want.
My email is if you want someone to beta.
| choyo chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Ur story seems like it will be pretty gud. But it wud be nice if u space out ur paragraphs & uesd more puncuations & quotations. Ur sentences seem to run together
| Nicia chapter 4 . 5/20/2011
I'm so glad that they're looking after Rose! Hopefully she and the baby will now be okay! xx
| Lil-Miss-Disaster chapter 4 . 5/16/2011
awesome chapter keep writting D