Reviews for I Won't Die For You
NeonEnigma88 chapter 8 . 7/3/2013
That was beautiful and I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing!
twilightwoods27 chapter 8 . 6/17/2013
Loved it!...great ending ;)
Daggers4U chapter 2 . 3/13/2012
Ohhh...that would be creepy!

Was Mr. Masen Edwards father in this story? Or did u just use the name?
folm chapter 5 . 7/29/2011
WHAT! Oh Bella, asking your abusive ex to move in with you after having sex with a vampire? Now that its written down plainly on paper you can see what a bad idea it was, right?

(PS Good story:)
folm chapter 4 . 7/29/2011
okay, I was all ready to review, wondering if Jake is a wolf, etc, then you ended with the visual of wet Edward in a towel. Umm, I can't think right now...
folm chapter 3 . 7/29/2011
Edward is a bit of a sad sack, to be honest...but Alice rocks!

I laughed out loud when she came in without invite & told Bella she watched too much TV!

Good for Bella- I like her independence.
folm chapter 2 . 7/29/2011
Loved the line, "Edward is a whole level of crazy that I just don't need"- good intuition. Excellent that Rosalie laughs!

But Bella IS attracted to him...

I'm willing to break your jaw if you call her that again...he says softly! Love it

Was Edward her teacher...or was her teacher the Edward's Dad?
folm chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Liked the description of Edward as a boy who dropped his ice cream- that was very good!

Also agree, Charlie (as Billy Burke w/o tache) is handsome ;)

So the dupport group is for battered partners...WHy is Edward there?

Like the story- it was recommended on a different forest blog.
Kree-on-toast chapter 8 . 4/25/2011
aawww it's that warm fuzzy happy ending...

eewww u let that dog slobber on her gross! LOL

i totally hate dogs... at least james and Icky got their end... tho... what happened to Laurent?
Kree-on-toast chapter 7 . 4/25/2011
will she ever learn?

you can't run away and let sleazeball james get you without alice and jazzy close by LOL
Kree-on-toast chapter 6 . 4/22/2011
hmmm i think i missed a chapter review in there somewhere...


so i was talking to a friend the other day... turns out I'm not the only crazy one around here after all :P
Kree-on-toast chapter 4 . 4/22/2011
damn that evil little pixie! can a rip apart the nasty tempered mutt?
Kree-on-toast chapter 3 . 4/22/2011
LMAO... a killer to get rid of the damn mutt... HAHAHAHA...

i love your wacky mind hon, don't ever change :P
Kree-on-toast chapter 2 . 4/22/2011
Oh god... i shuddered at the thought of someone being in her bed... that is the creepiest feeling on earth... i know it well. it is the reason i don't sleep in a house alone. i can last 4 days without sleeping if i have to... though i don't think that I'm sane by the end of it
Kree-on-toast chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
i remember the 1st time i read this... it took me longer than it has this time... so i thought i better leave a review LOL

he creeps me out... like every dark and mysterious lad should LOL... i almost think he should be a james about now :P
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