Reviews for Awkward Conversation
Obversa chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Overall, I think it's a good, but not a great, piece of work. Suggestions include removing "Charlie's POV" and adding it to the summary, since Phil's POV isn't included. Also a minor error, Phil is a minor league baseball player, not a major league baseball player. (Source: Twilight Saga Wiki)