Reviews for Trouble
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
OMFG soz about the language but that is 'not joke' the best fanfiction I have ever hread and It was evan better cause elena wasn't in it love
staretoile chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Hello Adena,

a moment ago I red your story Trouble. It is a little bit strange

to read that Jeremy is the Salvatores brother in your story. But

you did a good job.

Stefan is not thinking before akting. So that he gets in trouble

with Damon because he skipped school to get drunken with Tyler

and Matt. Damon is not amused about that and gets to the woods

to catch Stafan and takes him home. There he takes care about him

and let him sleep all night.

But not only Stefan is akting childish. Also Jeremy is in

he gets in trouble with Tyler, then he lied

towards Alaric and went to the grill instead of going home and

last but not least he lied to Damon. Boy, that will have

consequences. Damon punishes him very strong. But after the

punishment he comforts him very cute and he thinks that he could

have been to hard to Jeremy. He seems to be a very caring big


Stefan also get a hard punishment and you can read that Damon

hates this part of his duties.

All in all it is a great story.


ember chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
love this. Wish there was more of this type of stories out there!
river chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
very cute brotherly love story. Its well written and had me wanting more.


enjoyed it
ringgold913 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Nice job showing what a big brother should do
Iop chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
This was good even though Jeremy is not my fav character.

I love seeing Damon as the caregiver of his brothers

God bless
bluebird82 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
do a sequel!
tvdrules chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
please continue this story..its amazing :D
jasmeen chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
felt weird..damon being all serious...not used to it..anyway best of luck for future...thxxx for sharing...:):)
Mogs chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
That was a really nice story, thank ou :)
ReadMyPaige chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
i loved ittt! you should defiantely do more like thiss! :D i love the whole Jeremey damon and Stefan being brothers! :D
hell chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
That was cute. I like damon, stefan and jeremy as brothers.
boycrazy30008 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
I LOVE IT! I loved how Damon ferlt bad about it, but knew he had to do it! I really love the idea of Jeremy as their younger brother! I hope you do more for this idea! I would love to see Stefan, and Jeremy getting in trouble together!
wandamarie chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
they booth earned the spankings they got some times i wish i could spank my uncle john he is almost 56 years old an act like a 6 year old that needs a good old fashion spanking or a trip out to the wood sheed
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