Reviews for When There Was a Tomorrow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ...damn, just...Damn! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So that's it. Very interesting story and while I don't really know that much about Halo. I also don't have any problem with it. The combination of these two universes and the battle of Reach was definitely interesting and while somebody could say that Normandy didn't change that much, they also had several new problem to deal with. I don't really know why, but the major problem I had was with Shepard, while as a vanguard he was a very dangerous combatant. I somehow lacked his aura of leadership. Maybe it was because he faltered at the beginning, maybe because he was unable to deal with losing Tali... But even after that I still didn't see the legendary commander. Otherwise it's very good story and I enjoyed reading it very much :) Yeah, and Six is still alive! Still alive! Well, I can hope... :-D Anaway, sequel here a comes! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I got to hand it to you man this one fuckin awsome story. Wish my writing was as good. About that whole thing wheere Kalowski and his fellow marines, I like the whole idea of adding OC's into the story. It gives the writer the ability to shape his/her own characters. I know you probbly won't respond to this, but I just wanted to say that I'm hooked. Thanks for publishing this story. And you are right about the whole refference thing about other movies. But who cares rigth? All good ideas are just modified off of other ideas. It just takes the right mind in order to create something totally new and cool. Can't wait to see how this ends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() While I'm enjoying your story I have to call bullshit on this one. Sorry but there is just no way in hell for someone acting THAT stupid to infiltrate Normandy. Even if the crew really let him pass and I seriusly doubt it since Normandy is not so big, even I can probably recognize all crew members and they went through hell together. There is still EDI... He would be unable to even get INTO the ship undetected and even if he teleported himself there, he would still be discovered immidietly or right after his first action. That was in EDI's power even before being unleashed... Now the spy would probably find himself even unable to send transmission... But as I said at the start, otherwise your story is pretty good. I have some minor problem with character, mainly Shepard but them not being perfect may not be always a bad thing. And because I never played Halo (or any other console game) I'm unfamiliar with the events hapenning since from what I gathered you're playing it closely to Halo: Reach game plot? Well, it will be curious how much the Normandy will change and how hight the Reaper managed to get in Covenant hierarchy :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Small error I noticed here in regards to the Normandy's chain of command. Tali would technically be the fourth in command, not third as the order would go Sheppard - Miranda - Jacob - Tali. Also, technically, if the series proper had followed standard military protocol, when the ship's commanding officer left the ship with an away team, the XO was supposed to stay onboard. As such, Miranda should have stayed on the Normandy with joker and been the one in command of that battle. Even if she didn't go, by the time that Johnson and the Chief got on board, Jacob was back on his feet, and therefore should have been the acting captain at that time. as such, Tali shouldn't have had the option of ordering the Chief to stay onboard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm guessing that in D&D terms, either Dr. Solus rolled a 20 or that grunt rolled a 1 on its saving throw. Either way, I just wished those explosions did that much damage in the actual game. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the story and way to give six his due i looked up each of the death sceens online and you did really well matching the lines and descriptions to the events in the story (i assume the same is true of the rest) only kinda remembered reach but still well done still love emile im ready! how bout you ?! and six all alone on to guilty sparks now continuing the rise |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has been a great story. I honestly cannot convey how grateful I am that you put in the time and effort to write this story and I look forward to reading the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shit six... Why? Why Do this? :( Legion ain't gonna have no buddy anymore :( Some powerful emotions there from a Beth and Me |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have finally finished reading this story and all I got to say is... Damn what a ride. I mean seriously this is a fantastic crossover with incredible drama and action. If I had one problem its that the action scenes tended to drag on a little. Recommendations for future chapters is to break them into smaller pieces so that they aren't as ridicuolously long. Besides that great work and I look forward to future work |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was... actually quite amazing. When I started reading it, I had not yet played any of the Mass Effect games, and this story is what really drove me to play them. Thank You, General Rage. -C.O. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an epic story, I was really hoping that Six or Emile would live... course six's 'death' is only emplied at this point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn that was good, as a fan of Halo and Mass Effect this was the Xover I was looking for. Good job |
![]() ![]() how does jorge have a first? last name he should have a first name- number not first/last name/number |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck yeah Noble Team! I wonder what the Norm crew would make of the Spartan III's, I know you won't have the Normandy Crew be overshadowed by the Spartans by the way, but I am sure hopeing that both sides admire and appreciate the warriorism between themselves. Really cool story by the way. |