|Reviews for factory girl|
| TacoKing23 chapter 1 . 3/27
Dude I totally need to see a "five years later" to this timeline. This was funny and adorable. I just imagine someone jumping in between them at some point and yelling, "You, more decorum! You, less decorum! You don't have to meet in the middle, just take a few steps toward it!"
On second thought, maybe not five years. However long it takes for Zelda to really fall for Ruto. That is the part I want to see.
| reallybritish chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
But still, I'm thinking, "This is confusingly funny" simply on a loop. Confusingly funny in a good way, of course.
The last few lines were very funny, and so was the swimming bit - simply Ruto's speech and Zelda's reactions, especially in that part, were enough to make me love this. :D Really funny!
| XPloyalist chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
That was weird and completely out of left field. I like your thinking.
| Kelsey Pearl chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
"But can we get naked now?" lol, gotta love Ruto!
| msfcatlover chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Wonderful. Loved it.
| Roxius chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
ha ha this is really cute
| The Polyethylene Man chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
This is crack. Pure crack cocaine, and yet, still more plausible then reciprocated Link/Ilia.
| bish dish chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Unusual pairing, would have never thought of it.
But seriously that was awesome!
| Faith Purity-Quin chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
I really like this. It's so adorable and cute. But I think Ruto should be more nice, more understanding or behaving. Very nice.
| Sleepy Milkshakes chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
This story has been staring at me every time I read through your list of stories. Seriously.
I thought this would be a lot crack-i-er than it actually was. It was actually pretty beautiful, in its own raging-lesbian kind of way.
I'm adding this to my favorites purely because of Ruto's " - but can we get naked, now?" I died. The awesomeness. Really. It was too much.
| Agent Mississippi chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Uh, I've just been mentally scarred for life.
| ScarletCamellia chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
HAHAHAHA. OH. THE HILARITY. THE HILARITY.
| Insane. Certifiably chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
um, wow. Very interesting take on Ruto. Loved the line about 'pants or nothing'. I could see her doing that.
I'm not a fan of the pairing, but your story was so well done that I didn't mind. Good job.
| FluffySnowflake chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Bwahaha! The only thing I could think while reading this was, "What the hell?" XD
...but it worked, in some crazy way. Good job! :D
| sasukes chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
that is all.