Reviews for While Downstairs
MyGuiltiestPleasure chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
This is absolutely sad but truly thought provoking. I felt strong emotions for both Castiel and Dean. Both men lost in an evil world without much hope of finding their way out. Finding each other maybe the only light they'll find in their depressing existences. Wow, I am so happy my life never went this way and my mom loved me enough to keep me safe, healthy, and happy. Great story, I wish you could give more of this story. Maybe the dysfunctional relationship can benefit at least one of the two men in a way that gets them out of the life?
Ash chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
Yes, yes! He should put him in his pocket and sneak him out of there.
the-not-writer chapter 2 . 4/15/2011
Sweety, don't try to fight man love, you can't win...

I liked this! It was short (or will there be more chapters?) but it was also intense, like your usual stories!
BobbleHeadJesus chapter 2 . 4/15/2011
Blood Russian chapter 2 . 4/14/2011
Wonderful, as always.
Forneus chapter 2 . 4/14/2011
Whoa, this made my morning! Wakes up, and the first thing I see: hooker porn. Awesome start of the day.

I really like how you describe, both feelings, surroundings and events. It makes it all so much easier to picture, instead of having to come up with details on your own.

I really look forward to see more of this story; I'm really curious on how all of this is gonna unfold!
DragonPrincess001 chapter 2 . 4/14/2011
O.o! We ask, you deliver! Very hotness stuffs!
Blood Russian chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Very good, perhaps a sequel in the future?
DragonPrincess001 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Uhm wow, I think I just broke a little when it ended that way, without living to the anticipation...T.T break my heart, why dontcha? SHOULD cheapen it. Maybe just a little..? Or a lot...people would like a lot. lol ah, yeah. Great job with it though! Update it again soon!
BobbleHeadJesus chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
WHAT? No you should totally cheapen this. Cheapen the hell out of it. Cheapen it into the mattress. Or up against a dumpster behind the junior high. Or from behind so neither of you have to miss Private Practice. Because this is made of YES. Every molecule in it has YES written on it, and every cell wall is really just tiny YESs all smooshed together. Its DNA does not consist of GATC but ESY and it cannot help but live up to that genetic instruction.