Reviews for The Fall by SkittleE
Burntcore chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
This story was sad... but I found it hard to read due to the formatting and the structure. It kept pulling me out of the story.
katiedid903 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Whoa, intense! My heart breaks for both Bella and Charlie!
Twilight44 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Interesting take on NM. I liked it although is was terribly sad.
beegurl13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Wow, what a sad story. You did a good job with this. :) I like how far down Bella spiraled after Edward left, and that there was nothing that could help her, not even Alice. I felt sad for Charlie in the end...poor guy. :(

Nice job, this was good. :)