I truly enjoyed this story

The story was really Awesome. As was the epilogue. Though I really feel sad about Kurama.

Ending seemed really rushed but overall neat read

drama ahoy

This was a fic with a strong premise, a promising opening third, and even a good second third. Then it just kinda turned into what is essentially an outline, and petered out with no hint of the strength the fic had in the beginning. I understand burnout and losing interest in something, but this was a rough way to end a fic.

Konoha was not this dominant. You can't take out 4 hidden villages full force attack with no casualties

surely Minato would have made a best friend by now

while no one would just assume time travel. if Minato and Naruto were right next to each other someone *cough cough* Hiruzen would notice the similarities and that with him claim his name is uzumaki then one could assume shenanigans

I just don’t know about

The Third Raikage is called A. The Fourth Kazekage is Gaara’s dad Rasa, though I am guessing you meant the Third Kazekage. Also, you might have just made up names because the ones in the anime are mediocre. If so, it does not make a difference (just wanted to point it out).

The story was pretty good. Was only brought down by the author’s constant complaining.

The fact that there is no lemons is the reason why I'm not reading the story I commenting to say I appreciate you letting me know that up front so I don't waste time reading the story.

It was quite refreshing to read your work.

In no sense, I would say that it reached the professional levels of GRRM or Tolkien or even Joe Abercrombie in grit and gruesome, but it was great. You wrote it as it is... fanfiction.

There were certain elements that I like and your interpretation of time travel for Naruto where he did not get all lovely with the past generation.

Overall, it was a commendable effort and you have reaped the results.

I know you don't respond to alert ads or anything messages because of their jerks on this site I want to ask if I could write a slice of life story from your site story the feeling that gaps if it's okay with you happy holidays and I wish you the best and thank you for at least trying most fans sensitive jerks

I’m sad the story will end so fast but I can relate to loosing interest in a project.