Reviews for Defeat
cara t chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
This was beautiful. Hauntingly, painfully beautiful.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Better than I thought it would be...
FullDarkNoLight chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Wow, that was intense, really good though. And kinda scary, ok maybe a bit more than kinda scary... Good job
cinderrain chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
This was... um. Interesting. And dark.
char1ie chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
That was so intensely dark. I loved it
Violent.V chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Very dark. Gale was so guild-ridden of killing Prim, he lost his mind?
Wonderful description and style of writing. I liked it.
swiggity swame this is my name chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
...That was dark but very good! _
mrsodairmockingjay132 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
How could Gale do that? *sniff sniff*
irishfan62 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Oh fun. Makes me start hearing Twisted Nerve in my head. Very well written, but very disturbing.
TheWallsWeBreakThrough chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Oh my gosh, you weren't kidding when you said this was dark! Brilliant though. Very well written. I read it like :O but in a good way. Cool idea too. Liked it a lot.
impalasandpocketwatches chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
You have a dark, dark mind, my friend. But I quite liked the story. Somewhat reminded me of Jack the Ripper. You wrote this very well, and I liked how you didn't describe the whole time period that he stalked the girls, but gave a brief idea of it. Keep on writing!
xxxflobreeziexxx chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
i loved it,it was creepy and weird, but very orignal.
srslyjulia chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
I think slightly OOC is a bit of an understatement, lol. But this is a deliciously creepy story, so I can't complain too much.
KoreanNinjaable chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
I really loved this story. One of the best Hunger Games fanfictions out there, even though it was slightly OOC. But, the story wouldn't be as fun if it was in character.

Oh, my, I'm rambling again.

Anyways, I prefer this Gale over the one in the book. It's really well written and so wonderfully different.

Keep up the amazing work!(:
DarkWatersAhead chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
That was amazing. VERY original and great in the wat it was not just another Gale is upset, he did not get the girl fanfic. You are an amzing author.

DarkWatersahead
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