|Reviews for Home Alone|
| dj25taz chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
| langoria61 chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
I liked it u should make a chapter 2
| Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Haha, very nice Beastboy not like anything bad's going to happen from that!:)
| QueenZia chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
This is cute :P
| thekillerrox123 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
| user-is-void chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Ah! This is soooo cute! It makes me want to go write more fluffy BBxRae stuff! :D You honestly blow me away with all your awesome one-shots. I'm headed back to your profile right now to read more Rob/Star stuff by you. :3 I'm in a particularly fluffy mood tonight, and I thought, who better than Faith to make me smile with her amazing words. :D
| MizuIvanov chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
I can totatly se that happenign! i think you should write more BBRae stuff (:
| Hopelessly Unromantic chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
They're in a public grocery store. How do people react?
I do especially like that last sentence. Simplicity is the best way to go. :D
| RoseFeriel chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
uh i think u'll find that beastboy cant eat gummy bears seein as he's a vegi and gummi bears contain gelatine which comes from a cows knee or a pigs trotter but otherwise pretty good write a sequel if u havent already r another chapter
| dxs4ever chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
i like it that is really all i can say i like it
| TheLightningKing chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Dude... this was actually good, maybe what it needs is a new chapter, cuz honestly i am dying to know what happened next, than again stopping it there was also a good idea, leave it to the reader to imagine what happened next you know...either way, i liked it good and have deemed it AWESOME...after all...i am king
keep up the good work and i cant wait to see what else you got
| dark.violet.luminescence chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
I think the way you left Raven's reaction to our imaginations was genius. I can see Raven having a straight face after he pulls away then all of a sudden a few aisles blow up. Then she gives BB a really quick kiss on the cheek and they go back to shopping…and pay for the damages.
I don't know why I really typed that whole thing. I guess I thought it was nessasary. Yes, it was nessasary.
I too can see this as an opening for a longer story. I'm not saying you should or anything, but it would be a good starter in my opinion.
| Noah chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Make another chapter
| Fellinlovetoday chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Lol it was definitely cute. I loved Beast Boy mildly in denial and the way you ended sorta left things to out imagination, I really liked it.
| The Cretin chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Hey don't worry about it. I think you did the pairing justice. True it is important to try and get them in character but capturing the essence of the pairing is perhaps the most important of all and I think you accomplished that. So thank you for writing this. I do apologize for falling behind on your RobStar stories but I will catch up. In the meantime may you get the best in life. Keep rockin.