|Reviews for Home Alone|
| titanfan45 chapter 1 . 7/30
That was a nice one shot. Kind of wish I knew how she reacted but I suppose that would be up to the reader. Anyway, it was a fun read.
| dj25taz chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
| langoria61 chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
I liked it u should make a chapter 2
| Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Haha, very nice Beastboy not like anything bad's going to happen from that!:)
| QueenZia chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
This is cute :P
| thekillerrox123 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
| user-is-void chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Ah! This is soooo cute! It makes me want to go write more fluffy BBxRae stuff! :D You honestly blow me away with all your awesome one-shots. I'm headed back to your profile right now to read more Rob/Star stuff by you. :3 I'm in a particularly fluffy mood tonight, and I thought, who better than Faith to make me smile with her amazing words. :D
| MizuIvanov chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
I can totatly se that happenign! i think you should write more BBRae stuff (:
| Hopelessly Unromantic chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
They're in a public grocery store. How do people react?
I do especially like that last sentence. Simplicity is the best way to go. :D
| RoseFeriel chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
uh i think u'll find that beastboy cant eat gummy bears seein as he's a vegi and gummi bears contain gelatine which comes from a cows knee or a pigs trotter but otherwise pretty good write a sequel if u havent already r another chapter
| dxs4ever chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
i like it that is really all i can say i like it
| TheLightningKing chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Dude... this was actually good, maybe what it needs is a new chapter, cuz honestly i am dying to know what happened next, than again stopping it there was also a good idea, leave it to the reader to imagine what happened next you know...either way, i liked it good and have deemed it AWESOME...after all...i am king
keep up the good work and i cant wait to see what else you got
| dark.violet.luminescence chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
I think the way you left Raven's reaction to our imaginations was genius. I can see Raven having a straight face after he pulls away then all of a sudden a few aisles blow up. Then she gives BB a really quick kiss on the cheek and they go back to shopping…and pay for the damages.
I don't know why I really typed that whole thing. I guess I thought it was nessasary. Yes, it was nessasary.
I too can see this as an opening for a longer story. I'm not saying you should or anything, but it would be a good starter in my opinion.
| Noah chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Make another chapter
| Fellinlovetoday chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Lol it was definitely cute. I loved Beast Boy mildly in denial and the way you ended sorta left things to out imagination, I really liked it.