Reviews for Dally's Captor
shit bruh chapter 4 . 12/13/2014
QwQ no u stopped. Why
That winter soldier chapter 7 . 6/5/2013
The last part is probably one of my favorite parts in the actual book not that i dont like the rest of the book but anyways thanks for writing this i really like it
nonbinaryunicorns chapter 7 . 2/7/2012
Hmmm… Great story, but I think you should boost the rating up to M, because of… You know... The lemon in the first chapter. I just don't want this story to get reported for having rating, because I seriously love this story. Anyway, I'm going to go and read the sequel now.

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NaiveLove chapter 2 . 9/7/2011
Hey, I know you haven't updated this in a while, but I was wondering if you were planning on continuing? I reallyyy love this! I hope you updatee!
Diehardoutsider chapter 6 . 4/24/2011
Awe. Poor Johnny. Even though that happens in the book, I still feel sad about it. This was a wonderful chapter and with what you said at the end. I think you should do whatever everyone else seems to want. I don't matter. I really am looking forward to the next chapter and the sequal to this story. Great job and I am hoping for two more chapters instead of one but as I said. I don't matter
HetaliaHufflepuff33 chapter 6 . 4/24/2011
please go on! I love it!
RosieRoe chapter 5 . 4/24/2011
love this story. keep writing
Twiclipsee chapter 5 . 4/23/2011
yay you updated ! lol thanks for the shout out . I can't wait to see what else happens between Johnny and Dally :D
HetaliaHufflepuff33 chapter 5 . 4/22/2011
I hope you do more to this story, I really enjoy it.
Diehardoutsider chapter 5 . 4/22/2011
Omg. Thanks a bunch for the shout out That really means a lot. Also. Thank you so much for updateing again. I was so worried that yOu wouldn't because I really wanted to see what happened next. Finally. Great job on the update. I was hoping he would come to the church in this chapter. Great job and please update for me and that other reviewer you mentioned again. I bet they want to see what happens also. Great job

Btw. Sorry for the mess up review. I didn't mean to summit that one. Can't wait for the next update!'
Diehardoutsider chapter 5 . 4/22/2011
Omg. Thanks a bunch for the shout out That really means a lot. Also. Thank you so much for updateing again. I was so worried that y
Diehardoutsider chapter 4 . 4/21/2011
Oh. Please update again. I love this story. I really like how it is is dalles' point of view One more person better update because I really want you to iodate so I can see what happens. Great job with what you have. I just started it today and I love it. The first chapter was very descriptive. You know what I mean. But I loved it and the other two chapters. Great job and please please. Pleas updat again. For me. A reviewer who will review for every chapto if she can. Great job
Twiclipsee chapter 3 . 4/21/2011
I reeeally like this story ! update soon ! :D
Dawn Leo chapter 3 . 4/20/2011
interesting, what feelings does Johnny have for Dallas? And are you gonna change the ending so that they actually end up together?