Reviews for Shattered
Hey Hey Hey chapter 5 . 8/11/2016
Please update pleeeese
Guest chapter 5 . 4/10/2016
Pls pls update
Cris.P.C chapter 5 . 2/5/2014
Wow. I love how original this story is. x) So different, I love it. :D I truly hope you continue it, it's so interesting… Don't worry, I have faith on you and I'll wait for this story to be complete.. ;)
thepinktabby chapter 5 . 6/30/2013
Yay! Youre back! *squishy hugs* yay roughie c, is back too! *squeal* thanks for the update! I cant wait for more. :-)
Guest chapter 5 . 6/27/2013
Wow I loved this update! I'm so so glad you're continuing on this one! I love this fanfic, it's one of my favourites, and I have continuously came back to re read it and the out takes you have posted on your profile. I so love this and I hope you update soon!
kr2009 chapter 5 . 6/26/2013
Look at you updating! *confetti* I'm so excited for you to get back to this. Does the roller coaster come with valium though because I might need it. LOLOL. Anyway, I'm glad Esme had a good birthday and Carlisle sorta behaved himself. LOL. And I love Alice so I'm excited for more of her! And birthday surprises are fun! But sorta not fun because I have all the worries now. These two are young and kinda stupid. Which will probably equal a dishwater (also known as disaster but I spelled it so bad the first time that dishwasher is what google thought I was trying to say) when money is added. But I trust you! Just keep reminding me that I trust you, mmkay? LOL. ILY to infinity and beyond and thanks for letting me preread!
vausesandspanishharlem chapter 5 . 6/26/2013
The beginning was cute where Carlisle's like to Esme, "Make a wish, baby." And they're rich! Yay!
vausesandspanishharlem chapter 4 . 7/12/2011
That was intense!
letitbe54 chapter 4 . 7/2/2011
awesome, i loved it, keep going, i'll always b readin :)
YouDontKnowObsessed chapter 4 . 7/1/2011
wow, get story! I look forward to seeing more!
anhd1207 chapter 4 . 6/30/2011
Lemon hottest thing I've read in a very, very long time! I'll never think of cupcakes the same way LOL. As for Carlisle, I wanna go slap happy on his face. I know we're getting to the 'real' stuff now, and I can't wait to read it. I have a feeling I may want to keep slapping Carlisle over what he did to Esme. And KATE! God I wanna slap-a-hoe!

I'm glad they made up in the end. Great chapter Mel! I just wish I could have read it earlier LOL. I can't wait to see Esme's POV of this.

Thanks for writing something so amazing and original! You rock!
texasunshine chapter 4 . 6/30/2011
You know my thoughts of this chapter but let me repeat some of them.

Tattlisle is still a douche for not telling the whole truth.

Kate is still a very big bitch and needs Esme to beat her!

Obviously I feel very strongly about your little story. I for reals love your Esme so much!

3 the kitchen sex and LOVE YOU TOO!
GuardiolaDragons chapter 4 . 6/30/2011
Your Carlisle reminds me of Van from Fast Lanes (An awesome TV show PFach was in), he was all emotionally vulnerable & messed up on occasions. I love the fact he's in College & trying to make a go of it.

Kate, ugh, I want to throw het in front of a bus. Whore messing around with sweet old Tattlisle. Btw, tattoos & Carlisle hotness!

I adore your Esme, she's so strong & stable & focused. The scene between her & Carlisle are perfection. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter & I cannot wait to read more.
alexa-hallywell chapter 4 . 6/30/2011
*squeals* You're the best really! I almost fell off my chair when I read the a/n! And hell I LOVED this chapter! Of course I'm not entirely on tattlisle's side but he needs some college fun ;) I love the drama you're creating around them, the fact that their lives aren't as perfect as they think, I also love the fact that Esme is slowly and unconsciously making little holes in their relationship with her desire of getting a degree, she's so focused on 'fixing' their futures that she can't notice carlile's uneasiness. Amazing chapter! I love this story so much. Thank you, thank you, thank you for this surprise! You really made my day xxxx
kr2009 chapter 4 . 6/30/2011
Let's try this whole be first thing again with a numbered list.

1. Tattlisle was an asshole.

2. I love him anyway...and so does Inkme.

3. Kate is a whore.

4. Kitchen sex in win. So. Much. Win.

5. I now want a cupcake.

6. I love you.

7. Remember that long email? There's the rest of my comments. )

If readers come after you, I'll protect you. I think that's part of prereader duty. Or if it isn't, it can be now.
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