Reviews for Behind the Door
sophie chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
i like it a lot. the only thing I would say is the first line should be the second line. and the first line should be "together forever". don't use the title as a line.
rosa chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
I understand your point of view people,trust,decisions, and results I completely see your future in my own point of view meaning I don't control it. I'm just a 14 year old but I guess my mind isn't where it belongs. I love expressions for the wAY they are expressed. Also not only me but others are able to reach dark without them knowing it. Meaning love can affect your lives but it kind of all start with you.
ali chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
I loved it, it was creative, dramatic deep and just what a peoem should be, it felt natural and not rushed like most people do, great job XD
asura asya chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
i like this story/poem i think its very creatvie
beenthere95 chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
This was really good. Exactly how I feel. I loved it. :)