|Reviews for Walking Comps and Raging Wedding Cakes|
| superblooper chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
This was a good story, nice descriptions. Will you be adding the other ones from your notebook?
| LOTW chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
That was a nice little skit. I enjoyed the particular scene you chose and how you elaborated on it. The way you characterize Bowser stays very true to the series as a whole, especially the specific game, with the right mixture of kind and malicious intentions.
My only complaint is that the flow is a little off, which can sometimes result in a bit of a confusing feel. But, overall, I really like your writing style. You managed to detail rather well Bowser's personality, not by describing him directly, but by him describing those around him.
Sorry about the ramble. Update soon.