Reviews for Worse Fates Could Befall Us |
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Ivy2010 chapter 6 . 4/28/2011 AWWWWWWWWWWWW I loved it! |
aruvnei chapter 6 . 4/28/2011 This is very sweet! But i'm sorry it's over. I hope you'll be writing a new story soon. |
aruvnei chapter 5 . 4/28/2011 can't wait for the next chapter! |
SwordSwallower17 chapter 5 . 4/27/2011 Just a quick note to mention how much I love your Mr. Bennet! I really enjoyed this chapter; you've clearly taken a great deal of care in your work with the text, in keeping to certain elements of the original story even as you make changes. Your version of events really works, which is not always an easy thing for an "alternative universe" to accomplish! And I am falling a little bit in love with your Colonel Fitzwilliam. Another lovely chapter! |
Wendi 'Triplet Mom' Sotis chapter 5 . 4/27/2011 I'm enjoying this story very much! Poor Bingley, what a way to find out, and so soon - but he who hesitates... Looking forward to your next update! Wendi |
Ivy2010 chapter 5 . 4/27/2011 I really really love this story! Post soon |
gppr chapter 5 . 4/27/2011 Very nice chapter. I am intrigued about Mr. Brown's silence. Why he hasn't said anything? And I am curious about what you have planned next for the residents of Longbourn. |
Ivy2010 chapter 4 . 4/27/2011 WOOOO! Go Jane! I have been waiting for somebody to make her tell off Bingley for so long lol |
j1878w chapter 5 . 4/26/2011 Great job. I'm interested to see how the Darcy/Elizabeth thing plays out at Hunsford. |
tcdavis chapter 5 . 4/26/2011 Wow, a commotion indeed! I loved it that Mrs. Bennet was thwarted in her attempts to know what was going on. Also that Jane and the colonel confirmed their happiness in being married, even knowing that Mr. Whathisname didn't go gossiping about the Wickham fiasco after all. Loved that Elizabeth and Darcy were simply peripheral characters in the scene of Mr. Bennet's study-you are really good at making me see things from different angles without it being odd or off-putting. Once again, nice work-can't wait to read about the next commotion. |
redriley chapter 5 . 4/26/2011 I have always been a big fan of the Colonel's and like it when he is paired with Jane. I have always thought less of Bingley for being so easily talked out of 'love' no matter how long he pines. I still hope to see some angst b/t D & E. I like your writing style and LOL at some of your dialogue. Very good. Post again soon! |
YepItsMe chapter 5 . 4/26/2011 Interesting that Mr Brown never said a word...but had R & J not married, he'd have been jabber-jawing all over town about it, I'm sure. Darcy is staying at Longbourn...very interesting possibilities! :) I'm lovin this story. |
aruvnei chapter 4 . 4/26/2011 very nice... |
emcrawfo chapter 5 . 4/26/2011 This chapter was great! I love how much they love each other, and the story is coming along so beautifully. I am hoping your story will be 80 chapters... |
Fionina chapter 5 . 4/26/2011 Hi, Misses Bennetts reaction was really good! So typical for her) Good, that Lizzy knows, what Wickham really is. Fionina |