Reviews for The Dinner Date by Burntcore
greygirl2358 chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
I know it's been 3 years, but you REALLY should continue. I don't know why you stopped, but it is really good!

Btw...I am very glad you weren't going into details about the rape. We know what it is. No need for details.
Jyoti chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
This was scary good and I really mean that. It was written so well it made me shiver with fear. Very well written.
MackenzieStarr chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
i love it but mike scares me! just a little but im called a frea cuz i love psychos lol but im sad cuz he killed edward update soon Peace!
Mrs. Jim chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Oh my gosh! What a sick fuck!
Twilight44 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Yikes that was scarey!
beegurl13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Holy cow, this was freaky! :D I liked it! :D Poor Bella, and apparently poor Edward. :) Nice job, I think you totally made Mike into a complete wack job, and it's sorta awesome. :D
Dannika Summers chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Eeeee-yowww! Poor Bella...I hate Mike so much effing more than I did before...pooooooor Bella I feel for her :'(
roon0 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
OMG He killed Edward didn't he? Poor Bella, so hopeless; grieving for her love and in the hands of a delusional madman.

This is a wonderful, if really creepy tale.
tiffaninichole chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Just... wow.

I love non-canon pairings and since Mike is always getting the shaft in fics, I was excited to read this...

When I clicked on the link to your story, I was expecting Mike and Bella would be happy together and Bella would get killed in an accident or something, but wow.

This was some twisted shit!

I can't believe he killed Edward and goddamn... I just... I mean, I'm speechless.

You did a really good job conveying the creepiness, the despair, the fear, the helplessness.