Reviews for The Dinner Date by Burntcore
Jyoti chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
This was scary good and I really mean that. It was written so well it made me shiver with fear. Very well written.
MackenzieStarr chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
i love it but mike scares me! just a little but im called a frea cuz i love psychos lol but im sad cuz he killed edward update soon Peace!
Mrs. Jim chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Oh my gosh! What a sick fuck!
Twilight44 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Yikes that was scarey!
beegurl13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Holy cow, this was freaky! :D I liked it! :D Poor Bella, and apparently poor Edward. :) Nice job, I think you totally made Mike into a complete wack job, and it's sorta awesome. :D
Dannika Summers chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Eeeee-yowww! Poor Bella...I hate Mike so much effing more than I did before...pooooooor Bella I feel for her :'(
roon0 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
OMG He killed Edward didn't he? Poor Bella, so hopeless; grieving for her love and in the hands of a delusional madman.

This is a wonderful, if really creepy tale.
tiffaninichole chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Just... wow.

I love non-canon pairings and since Mike is always getting the shaft in fics, I was excited to read this...

When I clicked on the link to your story, I was expecting Mike and Bella would be happy together and Bella would get killed in an accident or something, but wow.

This was some twisted shit!

I can't believe he killed Edward and goddamn... I just... I mean, I'm speechless.

You did a really good job conveying the creepiness, the despair, the fear, the helplessness.