Reviews for Obvious?
Pandoa chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
You kno that's happened to me before the first time I swore that the two ppl on the other side of the door could never be doing IT and just merrily barged in and got an eyeful of cock then the next time i swore without a doubt that what i thought i was hearing was one seriously hot session of you kno what but it turn out that my friends had been making coffee and one of them spilled it on themselves (idiot -_-).

P.s. I realized i'm suppose to be reviewing on the story so here goes it was really hilarious how oblivious and somewhat naive James was and Remus was like no help at all he should have tried harder to stop James! but anyway even though this was just a short one shot it's really well written. _
marksmom chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
So cute! I loved it...more please?
Hatake Tsughi chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Poor james XD that was hilarious!
shadowdweller25 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
That was great!
xXx SyroPhoenix xXx chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
LMAO! Serves James right! LoL thanks for the wonderfully light and humourous read, well done! Kisses and Huggles, SyroPhoenix
mochiusagi chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Pfftttt hahahhahaha I love how James really did faint. Hahahhaa that was hilarious!
lil joker 1989 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
good one-shot ]
xAkireix chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
At moments like these, I wish this really happened and I could have been there to see it. XD
Suto-Chan chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
lol wow, that was too funny love it of course but god, james is an idiot, lol
Cazzylove chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
Great New One-Shot Honey _ James is an idiot lol _ _ _

love peace and chocolate _ _ _

Blessed Be _ _ _

Cazzy _ _ _

(PS How are you?)
bo7162 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
That was to real for me. My Dad walked in on and my friend in our basement when I was younger.
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