Reviews for Old Man Winter and the Ice Prince
Hikari Heartache chapter 3 . 5/1/2011
"Fuck being calm, that limey went way over the line." I feel like Russia completely missed out on the whole keep calm and carry on thing lol
Hikari Heartache chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
This is still epic! I like the eye patch idea
Hikari Heartache chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
"I hope they're not like your women, Doitsu" This whole story is complete genius :D
noface chapter 3 . 5/1/2011
Yo! i have to say octy reminds me of ciel~! so i think its pretty cute...go russia kolkol
vomitchan chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
Pfff, this is awesome. Very nice way to include an OC. It's also freakin' hilarious, Japan being the perv he is. xD

Yeah, and your grammar is certainly comprehensible, don't worry. :3 It's just the quotes, I think. Like:

"Blah, bloo, bleh," he said; Instead of:

"Blee, blak, blih." he said. And I don't think you should mush them all up into one paragraph, try to make a new line every time someone says something.

I feel like a dick for correcting you, but I hope I helped anyway. _;
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