|Reviews for Bridge|
| Villain84 chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
That was great! I love this story. I love how you made it seem like like a typical marriage where the hype dies down sometime after the wedding. The way Karin was acting the whole time was perfect! Same with Sasuke. I like how you included the reflections on the past where it was after their wedding, and surrounded by their friends, and during the happy days of their marriage when they took care of each other and their house, and how they eventually let all of that fall to ruins. And then I liked the ending where Sasuke learned that Karin was pregnant, and he apologized and promised to be there for her. That was great.
Just one thing though: I don't get what Itachi and his wife were doing there. It seems like it was Sasuke and Karin's house. Were Itachi and his wife just crashing there for the night or what?
Anyway, great story. I was looking for a good Sasukari story, and this one satisfied. Excelent mechanics and writing style too. You are a really good writer :)
| MyHikari chapter 1 . 4/18/2011