Reviews for New Friends, New Places - Chapter 2
Martin'sBloodPhobiaIsBack chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
A great story. Very good.
Sonri chapter 1 . 8/28/2001
Please finish!
Gracie chapter 1 . 12/12/2000
Hello-o, is this ever gonna be finished? (Please? : )
Gracie chapter 1 . 9/14/2000
Good, bravo, I like the direction this is headed. But please don't hurry to finish-it's better to make us wait, and give us the best you can write! I only say that 'cause this one is not quite as well written as Part One-I think if you re-read it, you'd say, "Oh, that's not the word I meant to use" a few times. But on the positive side, I definitely like what you've got here-you are great at cliffhangers! A suggestion-I think that maybe this would be better without showing us "Meanwhile on Voyager." Make us wonder, and tell us at the end of the story in a super-short summary from Chakotay to Janeway about how they located her . . . etc. It might be better for this particular story if you restrict your narrator in just one place-with Janeway. Just a suggestion . . . can't wait to read Part 3, but again, don't hurry too much! : )
mandy chapter 1 . 9/13/2000
Heyy :) This is really really really intresting :):):) I only wish i could write fan fic like that. hehe ;) GREAT STORY! :)
verdandii chapter 1 . 9/5/2000
I liked it. I'm glad u finally continued it...hurry up & finish it:)
Jaclyn chapter 1 . 9/5/2000
cool story. well-written. argh...write part 3 already!