|Reviews for First War|
| TheCauldron chapter 1 . 4/30
What a fascinating idea!
| laraquick chapter 1 . 1/26
Amazing what one sensible decision by Severus can do to change events. And Dumbledore wasn't needed to stick his nose in to the matter.
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 1/13
Lily is mama bear! Wonderful outcome!
| Greysh chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
| Abbey Grimm Dawn chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
(in awe of you forever)
| KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
you are so boring that i feel like typing with one hand.. your story about cliches is the only one i like, this on the other hand is so bad i may as well read a freaking mary sue. harveste? paper marriage? whore lily? check check check. go fuck yourself
| kat callan chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
THAT WAS FREAKING CRAZY!
| JokersLastLaugh chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Always writing very good stories.
| CharmedArtist chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Ahhh, good one
| LoireLoa chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
That wasn't what I expected, but it was still interesting.
| Tezi the Waterbender chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Hi! This was really good, but I'm feeling a teensy bit depressed. I thought I had a really good idea for a story where Snape went to Lily after he heard the prophecy, and how that would affect the war (very badly, in my head, but apparently not in yours) and I just realized that the idea somewhat could have come from this fic. Is it alright if I still right the story? It is going to be very, very different, I think, so...
| High Reacher chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
I like this one too. You should continue it as well.
| Pyrane chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Lily POWER !
| Bushwah chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Awwwww! You've got everything, don't you, perfect emotional response even without other controls... If you wrote a darkfic, you'd have me in despair.