Reviews for First War
Sailor Pandabear chapter 1 . 9/25
this is nice
Illucida chapter 1 . 9/14
This was a unique and entertaining spin on things. I enjoyed this greatly. :)
fireball900 chapter 1 . 7/10
Always liked awesome!Lily.
HikaruWinter chapter 1 . 6/4
Lily is AWESOME.
Like, I knew she was, but this reinforces my opinion.
Also, I like your Severus. And your Petunia. Your Marauders too. All of them, really.
(And Harveste... there are evil parents everywhere, I guess... It sounds like an Adams Family kind of name, though)
TheCauldron chapter 1 . 4/30
What a fascinating idea!
laraquick chapter 1 . 1/26
Amazing what one sensible decision by Severus can do to change events. And Dumbledore wasn't needed to stick his nose in to the matter.
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 1/13
Lily is mama bear! Wonderful outcome!
Greysh chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
nice :)
empressdawn chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
(in awe of you forever)

thank you.
KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
you are so boring that i feel like typing with one hand.. your story about cliches is the only one i like, this on the other hand is so bad i may as well read a freaking mary sue. harveste? paper marriage? whore lily? check check check. go fuck yourself
kat callan chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
JokersLastLaugh chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Always writing very good stories.
CharmedArtist chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Ahhh, good one
LoireLoa chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
That wasn't what I expected, but it was still interesting.
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