|Reviews for One Piece and Dragonball Z|
| dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
| dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
| fangs4fun chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
You really need to learn how to use "there" "they're" and "their".
| Y Super Saiyan Y chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
this is good!
| avatoa chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Where do I start. First of all you need to work on the beginning of this chapter since you repeated the same phrase twice. You also misspelled true. And when you said "3 years later" after Luffy first met Goku, it actually should have been "1 year later" because at the beginning of the next paragraph you say they are both 7 years old.
| Wajinator chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
i love this story so far update