Reviews for The Vadarian Trap
Guest chapter 14 . 6/24/2014
Wow amazing story! You are a really great writer. Your stories are so fresh and exciting.

Thank you so much!

Louise xxx
newaunty chapter 14 . 7/23/2013
Great story, thank you. Now I'm off to see what else you've written.
Just-Me-and-My-Brain chapter 2 . 7/14/2013
Honor Reid chapter 14 . 5/23/2013
Another great Star Trek story! I really enjoyed the story, and how Kirk survived through very harsh conditions. Thanks so much!
Pearlkat chapter 14 . 1/10/2013
Yea! Another great story. Poor Kirk, though. He goes through so much.
ece23 chapter 14 . 1/4/2013
I really enjoyed this story! I love how Kirk was so heroic and never gave up, and you got the characters and relationships down perfectly - thanks for the great read!
Mystical G Panther chapter 14 . 6/27/2012
Great story!
Garagina chapter 14 . 7/10/2011
great story! I loved it
Trena Too chapter 14 . 7/5/2011
Thank you, thank you, thank you. This resolution works much better. Kirk now knows he is home, and each admits his doubts over the other's survival during the past few months. Spock was right: Kirk may have doubted and come close to despair a couple of times, but he never succumbed to it. He kept trying to save himself even when there was little chance of success. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
Kitty O chapter 14 . 7/5/2011
Very good!
StoryGardener chapter 12 . 6/22/2011
Trena Too, you're right, it needs a better ending. Funny how I had forgotten about Kirk not knowing that he has been rescued...

I was too hasty to move on to the next story - though I hadn't thought there would be one more.

I'll try to rectify it as soon as possible.
Trena Too chapter 13 . 6/20/2011
While I like this story and the rest of your work, this resolution does not seem complete. Since most of the story has been seen through Kirk's point of view, the story should return to his viewpoint at the end. While we do know that Kirk is going to survive, he doesn't know that he's been rescued. Even a few more lines that would give us this information would make for a better ending.
StoryGardener chapter 13 . 6/16/2011
Hi Romanse and everyone, thanks for the encouragement! Well, this is it, though. I might come up with something better, or a postscript. The other story ("The Past...") was brewing but I couldn't start it without finishing this one.

Do tell me, though, if this is the lousiest ending you've ever read and something about what you would like to read instead. I'll try to fix it, at some point.
Romanse chapter 13 . 6/15/2011
I just wanted to drop in and give you a HUGE note of encouragement to keep going, keep fighting for this story. I am waiting for the finished tale to write a decent review, but I think I recall seeing a note that this story was kicking your butt. I KNOW you have the story in your heart to tell and I CAN'T WAIT for it to be done! You are a superb writer and such a rare gem who loves to hurt TOS Kirk. That's my kind of writer!
T'Paya chapter 13 . 6/14/2011
Loved it. Great wrap-up of your story. You catch Spock wonderful. And I think the self-doubt of both friends here gives the whole story just that tiny bit more 'weight', well done!
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