Reviews for Dark Desires Part I
AntiSocialBookWorm chapter 1 . 7/30
Why is Lily such a Mary Sue here? The way Lily is actually described (physically) is as having dark red shoulder length hair, bright almond shaped green eyes, and a kind face. That's it. Why does everyone think she has to be some impossibly beautiful goddess?
Kazetoame chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
I know the story is old but Severus was born on the 9th of January, Lily was born about 21 days after.
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 14 . 11/3/2012
really cool chapter
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 13 . 11/3/2012
awesome wicked
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 12 . 11/3/2012
Lily Slytherin wicked
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 11 . 11/3/2012
great work
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 10 . 11/3/2012
wicked the prank was funny poor Lily potters got some punishment coming his way
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 9 . 11/3/2012
this is so interesting i cant wait to see dark lily
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 8 . 11/3/2012
ok what the hell is with the girl and Lil's parents bloody hell they act as if they love her but betray her
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 7 . 11/3/2012
this is unbelievable I'm so hooked
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 6 . 11/3/2012
loving this new Lily that is coming out and i like this new Bella
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 5 . 11/3/2012
wonderful work im love it
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 4 . 11/3/2012
wicked wonderful sweet petunia got what was coming to her
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 3 . 11/3/2012
i saw one spelling mistake but other then that story was great you for got want when Lily said I don't them to worry
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
another amazing awesome chapter i cant wait to find out what lily or sev will do to little miss perfect that would be fun to watch
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