Reviews for Lost Memories
mithrilandtj chapter 20 . 10/12
Marriage law is NOT a British law. Illegal in the Queen's kingdom
Madam Bones could go to the Queen
IK chapter 2 . 9/27
The way you're writing this makes me question if anyone actually cares that he has amnesia.
mithrilandtj chapter 16 . 9/8
That marriage law would be shot down by the queen & PM
jetravenonyx chapter 1 . 5/29
Breathing books?! Oooooooookay, I guess it can't be as bad as the Monster Book of Monsters. At least, I hope not!
Q chapter 3 . 2/17
Sorry - this chapter ruined it all for me. Harry bursting out that his Uncle rapes him? Didn't he have amnesia? And to my understanding, most abused children go to great lengths to make sure they keep their abuse a secret - I mean, didn't Harry spend years downplaying his academic abilities? Yet you had Harry SHOUT his abusive experience out to everyone? *winces*

And then Harry casually speaks with Snape - where is the humiliation? The shame? Such emotions are typically associated with abused victims. I just felt really disconnected in this chapter. It was all too sudden and random.
SlytherPuff-AlwaysAFinder chapter 1 . 1/16/2015
You really shouldn't put spoilers in your notes at the end of chapters. The story is great so far, but now you've killed off any surprise I might enjoy by giving too much info ahead of time outside the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
Ms. Pomfrey would never say something like ''Remind me why he's at Hogwarts''. She's too nice and caring.
Lunacom chapter 21 . 6/19/2014
That was a really big jump in time. I give this story a Hogwarts P for poor. I understand that you didn't want be late on your updates nut taking time to develop a plot is what good story telling is about. The story could have been good without the mention of rape or Snape's attempted suicide. You had a good plot. Potter has personality change after memory loss. That was good. You didn't need much more when you add it to the cannon story. Evil Dumbledor was also unnecessary as well as Black's animosity after saving the man's life.
Lunacom chapter 15 . 6/19/2014
Having Snape for this far was uncalled for. This is a bit too ooc for Snape. This man would have been more angry at the situation not this depressed. This is a man who uses anger as a shield and words like a dagger. He also would have accepted his demons by now. Even if he didn't blame Harry for being angry he wouldn't be so weak as to give up his mission to protect Harry because of the boy's hormonal temper tantrums. I hope Black takes advantage of this life debt that was just created. A better way for that is for Snape to be just a bit careless while making potions and have the dog be close by.
Lunacom chapter 3 . 6/19/2014
Just for Dumbledor's information, rape and abuse is not an excuse to be in Slytherin.
Lunacom chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
Did you really have to go after Neville like that? The kid tries.
Alie-yaoi chapter 21 . 5/1/2014
I like
Guest chapter 20 . 1/17/2014
Who did Sirius and Ron get?
Griffin Raven chapter 10 . 10/5/2013
Minerva seems to have realised that Hermione's not the young girl she believed she was, because its very clear that she's not as smart as she thinks she is. Hermione clearly has some insecurity issues if she doesn't like the fact that the new Harry doesn't seek her help/or approval like he use to. Though why someone intelligent like Hermione does seem to be would be happy hang round a lazy/unintelligent with jealous issues like Ron Weasley when she could do better - even if she has little sense of tact and very opinionated, and narrow minded.
Griffin Raven chapter 9 . 10/5/2013
Lucius Malfoy never claimed to be on the light side - after all what had that side done for him or for any other Slytherin. I've always thought he was more kinda grey or dark - but he at least never pretend like Dumbledore does/or did. Even Voldemort didn't hide his true nature or the nasty methods he sometimes used/or got others to use. I do wonder if Dumbledore tried to manipulate Tom Ridddle AKA Voldemort when he was a student - along with being left at the mercy of muggles in an orphanage is true cause of his anger/hate at muggles and Dumbledore? If Harry's now a living vampire - does that mean he'll not be able to have children or what?
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