Reviews for The Price of Love
Guest chapter 9 . 1/16
Ned is a misogynistic jackass. Of course he'd blame Jessica for being raped and accuse her of lying about it just like he threw his pregnant, scared teenage daughter out of the house. Ned clearly has issues with women in this particular story.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/16
A who's the daddy cliffhanger: Is Jessica prego too? Is it Will or Jeremy's? dun dun dun
Guest chapter 6 . 1/16
Will is delusional. Since when is Jessica a "sweet, pure angel"? Second, not only has she told him, but she even wrote in her diary that she hated him and he still thinks she likes him or whatever and is blaming Melissa for some reason for Jess rejecting him? Third, he can't seem to take no for an answer and move the hell on. There are other girls in the world, dude. Jessica ain't all that.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/16
This guy Will seems like a psychopath. Maybe he and Jessica really are soul mates, even tho Jessica hasn't shown any of her typical sociopathic tendencies in this story yet lol.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/16
Ned is being a real asshole. This is completely out of character. He's treating his own firstborn daughter like crap while she's pregnant with his first grandchild/children. This can't be about money. It's not like the Wakefield's are hard up for cash, they're an upper middle class family; he's a lawyer. His attitude seems more about shame that his teenage daughter got pregnant out of wedlock. He's more concerned about how this reflects on him as a parent and the Wakefield reputation as a whole, rather than his daughter and unborn grandchildren.
KissMeInTheRain12 chapter 16 . 1/29/2008
this story was REALLY good.

great plots

great distinct characters

and so many more good things...

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the one thing i found HILARIOUS was tht u said u would post a sequel "soon".

it's been idk...6 YEARS since u last updated the story

idk about u but i don't consider tht soon...
Yankeexox88 chapter 16 . 10/23/2006
Great Story! Hope you write more
hAzEl.EyEd.GiRl chapter 16 . 2/11/2006
OMG! you have a really good story line here! I really enjoyed reading it, and I've already read your other two stories, and let me know when you start writing the other one!
J chapter 14 . 11/28/2005
I don't think any hospital would be stupid enough to let a baby that weighed less than 5 lbs leave the premises...
black child chapter 16 . 9/12/2005
loved it very much. al of it. i like it that you finish your stories and don't leave the readers hangin
SD chapter 16 . 6/24/2005
I CAN'T BELIEVE HOW GOOD THIS IS! THIS COULD BE COMPARED TO THE REAL SWEET VALLEY BOOKS! aLSO i LIKE THE FACT THAT ITS LONG
soccerchic chapter 16 . 6/10/2005
hey omg! that was an awesome stry it felt so real like it was just another book it was great! i wish it wasnt over cuz u r great at writting these type of stories um... i really dont have ne suggestions for u but keep on writting different fanfictions and ill read them keep up the good work(ok that sounded dorky but o well lol) and keep on writting
mother.teresa.between.rafters chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
i've review this before,i think as thejkidds sure- but i love it soo much i had to write again you are one of my favorite authors and i hope everything you ever wrote was this good gosh i could have been reading a sweet valleybook no novel if this was ever published and it would definetly be the best one you and summer kisses man!
reina chapter 16 . 9/22/2004
i loved it but why would have ever thought of coner has sweet he does like instantly dump a girl right away but what if something had ever happened between conner and jessica- wait this is a review-okay i loved it it was really seventy two pages that's way longer than any of my stories(not fanfics)you are a very very very very very very very very very very very very very good writer and i am sad to read the last words to this fanfic no! it's good enough to be its own svh book well in my opinion have i ever read something as good as this too bad i hadnt heard of this sight sooner because this was the best story i have ever read you are so creative
reina chapter 15 . 9/22/2004
yeaah! that ned wakefield finally acted his age some lawyer he is i loved it
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