Reviews for The Bullies' Plan
GodShot chapter 2 . 4/4/2012
This is a really good story you've got here. It seriously needs more reviews and exposure to readers. I like the idea of your plot, concerning Russell's attempt to take over the school but also makes me wonder how he'll do it. He's the last person you'll expect to have such ideas. You also captured the harsh reality of Bully's main gameplay. That's what pretty much caught me in this story. It's rare to see an elaborate description of Jimmy's 'fights' and 'bullying'. It was a nice read and I hope you continue it. :)
XXthirst chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Very good for a first writing. I can't wait to see how this story plays out