Reviews for Interrupted
mefoote chapter 4 . 6/7/2016
This was great thanks for sharing
Guest chapter 4 . 10/26/2015
Very good page turner! Funny & exciting. Looking forward to more!
RhondaLara chapter 4 . 6/25/2015
Wonderful! All your #NCISLA Stories were fantastic! #Densi
Guest chapter 4 . 8/17/2014
Wonderful! Thank you!
BelikovaBabe chapter 4 . 12/23/2013
Aww this should be continued
kath46 chapter 4 . 7/2/2012
that was a great first fan fic! i hope you write many more!
anonkp chapter 4 . 5/27/2012
Very sweet and well written!
NCIS LA Girl chapter 4 . 5/17/2012
Really good! Write another!
WelcomeToLeahland xD chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
This story is so cute! I think I may be slightly in love with Deeks xD
wolf-b13 chapter 4 . 10/26/2011
great chapter...awesome story so far...keep writing!
God'srider chapter 4 . 10/7/2011
I loved it! Well written and very in character! Sweet and funny!
Mrs. Rilla Ford chapter 3 . 10/5/2011
And sorry about the typo... The one time I don't proofread something... argh.
Mrs. Rilla Ford chapter 4 . 10/5/2011
What did I think... hmmmm...

To be honest? And I'm not saying this because it was your first fanfic, and let me tell you first that I have read THOUSANDS of fics... IT WAS GREAT!

You have good grammar, punctuation, you spin a story while still making it feel like the characters we watch and love on TV. Kudos, props, and congrats on writing such a fine story yur first time out!
notawriteratall chapter 4 . 7/19/2011
Great story!
guii chapter 4 . 7/14/2011
I liked, very much!That last line of Deeks was in th perfect moment!


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