Reviews for White Box
taylorelizabeth12 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
I dont normally like Draco/Ginny stories but I liked this one
bathtubblogger chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Ohooo! This gives me chills! (In a good way.)

I looove your style. I was instantly reminded of an insane asylum, which I think was your intention. I especially liked this sentence:

"Sanitized perfection, clinical, sterilized; untouched and untainted by even the tiniest hint of imperfection and the horror of the ordinary."

Excellent introduction.

I also liked your contrast of the 'perfect' world and the 'insane' one.

Good line: "closer and closer to the edge of sanity, until she fell into the inky black abyss of insanity that contrasted with the pearly white walls of her home."

Wonderful description, ahhh *goosebumps*!

This seems like an exceptionally hard piece to characterize simply because we really don't get a clear glimpse into Ginny's thoughts, but we do get a glimpse into Draco's. It is so sad- that "shell" image is wonderful BTW- that he had her once but because of his pride she went over the edge.

This is a terrifyingly creepy piece but I love it so much!

Kiles
Miss-Talkative chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Wow what a powerful piece...*shakes fist* damn you Draco how you could you do that to Ginny.

I love the descriptive nature of the fic you have created fantastic imagery.

Throughout reading you wonder how they become a couple in the first place.

Draco realisation at the end is to late, deep down he knows the Ginny he once knew has gone.

Anyhoo just want to say a very well written piece..Thank you!

Shai xx