|Reviews for Return of an Alpha|
| EmlynMara chapter 52 . 12/24/2011
It almost sounds like many of them could be sitting for their NEWTS - at least the practical portions. Too bad Umbridge will be able to take credit for how well they do on their OWLS. Sparring was great. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| PSay chapter 52 . 12/24/2011
This is great. I like the way you talked about their studying without making it boring. The pranks were great especially the swamp and the lily pad that caught Umbridge was genius. It was good to see them teasing Theo into studying for potions. The way they broke it up from time to time was excellent. Harry asking Madam Marchbanks to include the Partronus Charm for extra credit was sneaky and worthwhile. Harry's Patronus taunting Umbridge was terrific. She knew she didn't teach them anything like that. Of course she didn't teach them anything. I really like the fact that the twins are still there adding to the mayhem against Umbridge. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
| z to a chapter 52 . 12/22/2011
My school did it in reverse z first to a last.
| benperez31 chapter 52 . 12/22/2011
Great chapter. I like the duel between Harry and Astoria. I did wonder if you'd have them going to the Department of Mysteries. I haven't seen any sign of Harry's vision of the DoM corridor. Will Umbridge find their training room?
| Midoriryu chapter 52 . 12/22/2011
Very nice combination effort between the Twins and the other 3, I quite enjoyed it. I'm honestly surprised Umbridge hasn't gotten nasty what with all the pranks being pulled on her.
| nyxaurora chapter 52 . 12/21/2011
I LOVE IT
KEEP WRITING FOREVER AND EVER BECAUSE YOU ARE BRILLIANT
| eiqa chapter 52 . 12/21/2011
| YeCatsJ chapter 52 . 12/21/2011
| Lollypops101 chapter 52 . 12/21/2011
happy hanukkah to you too! think you can get another chapter up before the holiday is over?
| holimontski chapter 52 . 12/21/2011
i have to say i was hopeing that the swamp was going to make an appearance but then again not knowing where u are going on this ride its hard to tell...well happy what every u celebrate (GOT TO BE POLITICALLY CORRECT OR YOU GO TO JAIL)...kutgw
| Stephanie O chapter 52 . 12/21/2011
Loved the swamp, and Umbridge (literally) turning into the "toad" she is! :) Impressive duel between Harry & Astoria as well - I wonder if this will cement the idea in people's minds that she's an expert in the dueling moves? (As in any upper years who might have doubts about her teaching them.) Really liked how Harry's patronus really ticked off Umbridge during the DADA OWL as well - will it perhaps change her opinion of his abilities in Defense?
| jojor99 chapter 52 . 12/21/2011
Love the swamp - especially the lilypad. Great chapter.
| Miss Millie chapter 52 . 12/21/2011
I loved the Ch and hope that the things Harry is learning he will teach to the others. Every one kneeds to know laws and how they are made and enforced.
I like you love the swamp. Infact this gives a new meaning to the swamp.
Thanks for loads of great reading. I have a Color Nook reader and it can be a little hard to review. So I try when I get to the computer. Thanks again for the ride.
| Sharnorasian Empire chapter 52 . 12/21/2011
Great work Miz, as always. Oh and thanks again for agreeing to work with me n my project even though you no knowledge of one of the fandom _
| Victoria LeRoux chapter 52 . 12/21/2011
Anyway, haven't reviewed in a while but figured that since I have my iPod back, I may as well.
Fantastic chapter. About the Z thing- it's just a bad havig a name at the beginning. Nearly always, I end up bumbling through class presentations because I have no idea what to expect.
I love how you did the pranks and the swamp!
I'm running out of good, long ff's to read- any suggestions?