Reviews for Return of an Alpha
Call0013 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
peverralquest chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
''Becoming Alpha" was fascinating to read, can't wait for the next chapter of ''Return of an Alpha"
mudbloodpotter05 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Great chapter!

Even though it doesn't have much going on, thought it really does, it kind of sets the stage for what is to come.

Keep up the great work!
wizmage chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Miss-yellow-and-blue chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Yes! this is great :D I love the room, especially the walls :) your welcome on the review by the way :D and only once a week? :/ how will i be able to cope with that? :o I will have to get a life or something to have something to do the rest of the time. well, well congralulation to finishing your last story (do people actually say that) and good luck on this one :D
bob chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
NOOOOOOOOOOOO i neeeeeed my ALPHA fix twice a week!

why not double the dosage on sundays?
Bec chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Loved It! The bedroom wall was sooooo cool!
PSay chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
This is a good beginning for the second part of your story. I like the way that Sirius decorated the house. That was really thoughtful. Harry's room was excellent. The ceiling was unexpected because of the snakes but Harry likes snakes. The mural was amazing. Having his friends, the marauders and his parents represented was excellent. Their interaction was perfect. I really like the fact that Sirius has put up new family trees for him and Harry and even has new family trees for them to create. Very well done. I like the fact that Daphne had to interup Harry as he was sitting down to dinner. It gave him a good excuse for cutting her off. I look forward to more of this story. pms
Dee chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Yay ty so much for posting! I love your stories, and cant wait to read the next chapter! I read straight through the first in this story couldn't stop reading, you have talent. I hope you always continue to write! and ty for the wonderful stories.
sachaelle chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
love Harry's new room

and grimauld places in all Hogwarts
Stephanie O chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Great intro. to the new story! I can already tell it's going to be as amazing as the first! :) I really appreciated the summary of Harry & Co.'s animagus forms, because I was struggling to remember who everyone was! Loved the new house decor, and especially liked Harry's bedroom! The wall scene sounds absolutely incredible...just wish I could see it! The only thing I would've changed about his bedroom would be green carpet, to go with the forest scene.

"Nearby, Prongs was watching as he [say] beneath a tree..."

Am really looking forward to seeing more of H/G's relationship, and will be looking forward to the next installment on Sunday! :) See you then!
taylorelizabeth12 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
I like this. I dont normally like stories that dont follow JK Rowling's ideas, but I like this.
wi11ow chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Yeah the sequel! :) anyway great chappie. See you next Sunday!
Arian Eripmav chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
excellent chapter ... i liked the fact that the house was done up according to the hogwarts theme...
Uglyman44 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
It's great to be on the bandwagon!

I still love what you've done with Harry's ideals.

Can't wait to see the continuation!

Good luck, no pressure.
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