Reviews for Finding a Kind
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4
so far the story line has followed the movie a bit too closely [sans one small girl] ,the character development of maggie is moving along painlessly , and the action scenes keep the reader mariners character is about as well developed as the original author -{read, cardboard-} so it seems there is some room for creative construction of his background /past. ,the technical knowledge of sailing is refreshing to read. the meeting of " girlfriends" should prove amusing and rife with the much loved conflict of emotions people are drawn to. {personally the fish babe is already my choice.} the drylander doesnt stand a chance. there are several items mentioned in the movie that could be dwelt on -who are the slavers? whats the deal with them ? not smokers and not atoll clans . the navigation aide dwellers , more interaction with them is certainly a new venue , as they didnt get much of a chance in the movie. also small islands would be inevitable in any flooded world. -this also is an avenue of lastly trade between sailors can be entertaining ,not creepy like the 15 mins with the wee one guy,{that scene was lame]. overall you are holding up a good continuation of probable events from where the movie ends. ...post note ...what about the hybrid love child ? from his ex?
MirsaAceOfShadows chapter 3 . 1/31
Well, that's one way of avoiding a love triangle. I'm really sad they didn't survive, but somehow it fits, ya know? and I am glad to have Enola back, I really got attached to that kid :P
MirsaAceOfShadows chapter 1 . 1/31
quite the interesting concept you've got here, I like it. always did wonder what it would be like for Mariner to meet another muto ;) a little OOC on his part but still fun.

try breaking up your writing into smaller bites. this update had plenty of natural breaks that would make it easy to do so. and don't forget to edit before posting - polishing always helps things :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2015
Her right shoulder was grazed by the smoker but her leg was injured in the next part with no mention of the injured shoulder it how she aquired the leg injury.
strangeJenny chapter 6 . 6/18/2015
I know that this story is kinda old. But the film was on tv last night. So i'm reading the stories.
It would be nice if you could make it have a happy ending.
Sad that everybody died on Dryland.
I kind of imagined that Helena would have had the Mariner's child in the two years he was gone. But maybe this is just me.
- a Scottish reader
Steve chapter 6 . 12/9/2014
Really enjoying it so far cant wait to see how it ends.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/23/2013
Oh... I see... you do nothing but boring OCs that have very little character with plotlines that a 15 year old would come up with...
Guest chapter 2 . 9/23/2013
How the hell did the Mariner go form having feelings about Helen to your sorry ass OC Mary Sue so quickly?
dahorseyguy chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Good so far can't wait.
stayclever chapter 6 . 4/15/2013
Why has this story not been updated? Please do update soon. Surely this story can't end here!
Lunaticflower chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
I don't really know what to say about your story. After seeing the movie I was really happy that there was at least one fanfic out here. You write really well but the storyline seems to be partial identical with his adventures in the movie. I'm also a bit surprised that there are still so many smokers. And how did they know about Maggie?
Well, I just started reading so I will now go and see what's coming. Thank you for sharing this story! It's really a pity that there aren't any more on this website.
SamanthaJane13 chapter 6 . 8/27/2012
Hey love your story please update soon.
JudyL068 chapter 6 . 7/20/2011
I enjoyed this story. Good job taking on WaterworldG. The action was well done and I thought your original character Maggie was interesting. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this. Thanks for sharing.
randompersonthatyoudon'tknow chapter 4 . 6/1/2011
Bear: Welcome to the Blue House

Tutter: Hello from the small mouse

Bear: Things to do

Pip/Pop: Fun for you!

Bear: Howdy from the big Bear. Want some fun?

Pip/Pop/Tutter: Here's where!

Bear: Just for you

Tutter: All is new

All: In the House of Blue!

Pip/Pop: Lots of room at our house

Bear: Catch the moon at our house!

Tutter: Kitchen's here

Pip/Pop: Bathroom's there!

Bear: Attic full of stuff here

Ojo: Pillows full of fluff here!

Treelo: [Whoop-de-doo!]

Ojo: Just for you

All: In the House of Blue!

All: Welcome, welcome, welcome to the Big Blue House

Welcome, welcome, welcome to the Big Blue House

Door is open

Tutter: Come on in!

Bear: Now you're here

All: So let's

Treelo: [Laughs]
your awesome friendddddd chapter 4 . 6/1/2011
ahhahahah! NO! you must not whack me with a lamp! lololol this was very good. even the super explicit pornographic bit. just kidding, just kidding. but it was quite good. even if i have no frickin' clue as to who any of the characters are. anyways, we've got history final tomorrow o_0 and i have to go study...but GOOD JOOOOBBBBBB "MASIE". yay see you tomorrow! :)
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