Reviews for Riven by cornel
Twilight44 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Wow it really left me wanting to know what James said on the phone. And what Bella did to Edward?
beegurl13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Oh, this was so sad. :( I feel bad for Edward, falling for Bella and then having her not be what he thought. I like that he fell in love with her regardless, and I love the end when she's telling him to go and forget about her. How heartbreaking for both of them.

Great job! I enjoyed it a lot. :)
Nolky chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
she was sentenced to death?