|Reviews for Insomnia|
| Chief chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
| Claudere Foris chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Heheheehe Cheren better watch it. This was really cute. :)
| red-mage chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
| aestheticisms chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I love you and this is a crap review because I'm on my phone. Agsjd;; This was amazing, perfect, and just wow.
| down on fire chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Aw, the ending. So sweet.
Anyway, for an experimental piece, I couldn't find many errors in either the tense or the point of view, so nicely done. (: There were a few grammatical mishaps, but those happen ('it's' instead of 'its,' things like that). And while I do think that the numbers sort of took away from the story, I still liked this and the simplicity of it.
Thanks for sharing! c: