|Reviews for Every Kid For Himself|
| Katniss Everdeen 1230 chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
This is so cool I love it I've read plauge but haven't read fear this has made me want to sooooooo much it is so good please can you write another one Katniss Everdeen 1230
| AudioRascal chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Hey! got your PM. I really like this: well written and very absorbing. Maybe make your paragraphs a bit bigger, which is something i have to work on as well :D
| color my world bright chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Perfect. Just perfect.
Sam. Dekka. A bit of angst. The court questions...you write a lot like Michael Grant and it's very pleasing to read.
| Danceristheboyonfire chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
This is really good. I think everyones in charater. I'm pretty sure Sam's gonna break. I would. And everyone basing on him too.
| iftheworldwasonfire chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Wow, damn. I thought I had reviewed this. Sorry.
I love the flow and dynamic of this. The 'interview questions' that Sam always hears? Perfect here. Absolutely.
And you really capture the essence of what Sam's character is all about: he's the real hero. No one made him step up. No one forced him into being in charge of a half-destroyed town. He could've just ignored them all and taken care of himself. But everyone needs a martyr to fight for in a time of confusion, and Sam is that kid.
Great fic. You should write more GONE. :)
| The Timeless Clock chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Ahh, lovely. Love the ending. You wrote this very nicely, it had a nice ring and it was full of emotion. I think you captured Sam's desperation and frustration perfectly. I really like the court trial, it had the desired effect I think. There's not very much I can tell you to improve because I'm someone who says one-shots should be about emotion. But, I'm going to say this anyway, maybe a little description wouldn't hurt? The surroundings, what places look like. I got what people were feeling but not where they were. But great job anyway, keep it up :)
| samtempl chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
"He should... he should... Sam should be at home.
Sam should... Sam should... Sam should plead guilty."
I loved those lines. So simple yet very powerful. Very Michael Grant-esque, too.
Loved the whole fic, really. . I love Sam's internal battles against an invisible court. They're very meaningful and make him so much more likable.
| Clocks Striking Thirteen chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Wow, this is really good. I love Sam and feel really bad for him. Good ending. )
| Hahukum Konn chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
GONE fic! Woot! :) I really need to get caught up with this book series. :) (Personally i always thought Astrid and Sam would make a cute couple IRL if they existed :P )