Reviews for EO Challenge: Dark
blackrabbit42 chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Nice! Achey in all the right ways.

:)
Beckydaspatz chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Oh my goodness! You're a heartbreaker, you are! But DAMN that was extremely moving and poignant. GREAT JOB! I really LOVED this line :Things changed over time; the voice grew deeper, the neck grew thicker, the chest grew broader, but that soothing heartbeat never changed.

I just...this is fantastic.
battle at arizona chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
No! *kicks Dean's shin* ... I have to admit. Out of everything the boys have done, the one thing I cannot forgive is Dean's throwing away the amulet. So this saddens me.

But in a good way, because I just adooooore how you made me feel like Dean hurt TWO bb's that day; Sam and Amulet. This was completely perfect! Uber sad, but wonderfully tasty.

It can't end here though! A follow-up must be written for us firm believers that Sam picked up the amulet! ;)

B.
VoicesInTheWind chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I all but teared up.

Dang, this is good. Just . . . Wow.

-Voices
Nana56 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Aw. I miss him/her/it. All the jewelry is gone. Such a shame! :(

Nicely done. :)
Wolfpack pride chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
I fell in love with the line "The voice grew deeper, the neck grew thicker, and the chest grew broader, but the soothing heartbeat never changed. Then someone broke that heart." I was depressed when I watched that episode because he threw away his amulet. In my mind, he still has it. :)
masondixon chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Sad.

Go back and write your funny ones again!

Thank You.
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Oh nooooooo :-( This is sooo... dark. And my heart aches for his amulett, a tiny little thing with a funny face that is somehow so important - for Dean, for Sam, and for us :-) Thanks for bringing it back. I had my own drabble about it some month ago, and I never gave up hope that it'll find it's way home some day, in one way or another.

Wonderful, Dizzo!

xxx Kate
WeirdVision chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Loved the last two lines before the conclusion. So true.
oKay2beme chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
This is awesome! I absolutely love it! I actually read it twice because I was in shock after the first time.

The point of view is awesome; something I don't think anyone else ever thought of.

LOVE IT! Great job!
DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Hey Dizzo.

Poor baby, we have gotta get him back where he belongs!

Bev x
CandyCakes chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Awwww. that was so sad! I hope that they will be the amulet back!
LaedieDuske chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Oh baby, you make me wanna cry! His heart IS a good heart, and it's been broken way too many times. Damn you Kripke! *wibbles* I love your descriptions of Dean through the years. This was just so heartbreakingly sad, on so many levels, and so damn beautiful. *wraps Dean up for safe-keeping*
KatyMM chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Aw! Why can't they bring the amulet back? When Dean threw it in the bin, it just about broke my heart. Lovely (but terribly sad) drabble. Katy x
dreamlitnight chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Lovely! But, oh the angst in that last line. You packed a lot of punch in so few words. Very nice.
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