Reviews for It's Always Been Him
Hmmmm chapter 31 . 2/12
After re-reading this story I have to say I think Renee should have been arrested for attempted human trafficing, attempted extortion and assault, as well as conspiracy and accomplice of kidnapping, assault and attempted kidnapping and attempted murder
WiseOldSoul chapter 8 . 1/2
i dont get why he's so angry at bella..
if anything, she should be mad at edward for accepting tanya's
invite for the dance, then leaving his damn shirt at her place, plus,
tanya lied...he should NOT be upset with bella, she did NOTHING wrong,
whereas, he did.
WiseOldSoul chapter 20 . 1/1
first, josh's security team is a total failure. they are amateurs...
how jake was able to just walk up and take her from her
own home...simply, rookies, all of them.
knowing how unhinged jake is, bella refuses to take his
threats seriously. i mean, she didnt look through the peephole,
a simple act yet something that would have saved her. how stupid
of her. then, she is supposed to write a note and hope that someone would
know it was a fake? how about putting something in it to give a hint that
it was a fake? she has known her gang for many years, i mean surely she
could have put something in there to give them a clue?
just a complete failure on all...from the police, to the security, to bella herself...
Guest chapter 9 . 2/29/2016
the whole tiger kitten thing is kinda stupid and childish should not be in the story
mounds01 chapter 32 . 10/9/2015
Great story!
Guest chapter 28 . 4/11/2015
Nicknames are annoying. Tiger kitten bleh bleh. It's so bad that I won't continue reading
Guest chapter 15 . 9/7/2013
really liked they story so far but cant finish it to much tiger kitten in it makes the story kinda lose its purpose and it is irating nobody wants to read yes tiger yes kitten 50 times every chapter
Guest chapter 11 . 9/7/2013
love the story but the use of the nick names are used way to much makes the story way to corny in real life nobody uses nick names like that every time they speak to each other
LizziePaige chapter 32 . 8/8/2013
So glad everything worked out for them in the end. The mini-me's sounded too cute! Thanks for sharing ths story with us :)
AliciousMind chapter 32 . 6/4/2013
AliciousMind chapter 31 . 6/4/2013
What an end! I really liked this story. Maybe at the beginning it was a bit too naive, but so was Bella. Then it developed into the great and exciting story. I loved the plot-couldn't stop reading. I loved the action, the characters and the lemons, of course. Thank you for sharing your talent.
AliciousMind chapter 30 . 6/4/2013
Finally. I was wondering where the police were.
AliciousMind chapter 28 . 6/4/2013
Exciting. I really admire your imagination. I love the drama and cliffies :-P
AliciousMind chapter 27 . 6/4/2013
AliciousMind chapter 26 . 6/4/2013
Surprise, surprise *with sarcasm* :-)
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