Reviews for The Mating Connection |
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MsLiss chapter 25 . 8/28 That was glorious |
MsLiss chapter 17 . 8/28 Bella with a backbone woot! |
Photographywithlace chapter 10 . 5/19 I appreciate this story so much because we never get to see Edward and Bella date in highschool in the books and i love this version of how it couldve been |
Debbie Hicks chapter 43 . 2/17 44. Outtake 3. BPOV Oh no aliens/Vulcans bitten then blood then too late Sent two venom the broken the law hid them then but bitten best friends each two/ young ones in my rebellious phase then Tanya found me hunting people but fled to them good You Isabella broke lied good see turned too young see this of her changing people of you Cullens broke the rule blacking out finally gored heads-brain stumps. then with them good with them torn freely. then with them with Witnesses/five good Nothingness finally within three good with them good She who be judged over us See this. then it came too late found Esme tried to hide us/ them, good ours see put the ones to death good not her tore real heads. punished blew brought there. what non-humans good See this wiped freely with them tore heads-stumps good see this nuked what not living good ass all of it good they are lost finally then it happened terminated freely Alice who done to them Guard she woken up is not human but nuked with us/ their nuked with them, snapped freely was not in control hissing was the broken good you are not taught Taker three not screaming good see ours tore heads of us/ them yours then then lost from here brought there then wiped out good died there what Hunted animals not anymore Killed Good then Ashes/dust/dirt good Vampires bitten freely see this no longer vanished from here Alice who done to her/ army their guards declared that she not fit to live here so he/ them be a part of their coven gasp nuked freely With us/ them Smashed freely good Jane no longer both burn them there never existed again good were as all what not mortals Vampires what vanished last of blood good Jane then it happened good then never was alive then too late We been framed but they are as all of Hunting animals no thanks from here nuked feely from here as all of them vanished to from around the world Supernatural beings but of them vanished good nuked died there what not living what not humans few/remaining good wiped out see vanished freely more of them good wiped freely then it came witnesses/ allies of it too soon nuked with us/ them, |
JD Thorn chapter 34 . 12/26/2023 I’d like to know how Mike knew Bella and Edward consummated their relationship. I’m fairly certain they did not announce it to the school. Did I miss something? |
JD Thorn chapter 35 . 12/25/2023 Well duh, she wants to say goodbye to Renee. Makes perfect sense. |
JD Thorn chapter 25 . 12/23/2023 Wow, that was a passionate argument. But it shows how much of a hypocrite Rose really is. Bella was correct on all counts. I think Rose is way too self-centered to see ANYONE else’s pain besides her own. There really is no excuse for that. Maybe the reason Emmett is such a pain in the butt is because he is hiding his pain behind it. By the way, I do love Emmett, I just get frustrated with his seemingly obnoxious cavalier teasing of Edward regarding his sex life which is in fact really NONE of Emmett’s business. He needs to stop that behavior and be a support system, not an annoyance. |
JD Thorn chapter 23 . 12/23/2023 I wonder why Edward did not take this opportunity to discuss the issue of marriage to each other. Love the ring idea. Maybe her wedding ring should be similar same stones, but with his venom instead of her blood. Lovely chapter. |
JD Thorn chapter 21 . 12/22/2023 I would really like to know why Emmett is still teasing Edward. Didn’t Carlisle make it perfectly clear that SUPPORT is what Edward needs, not RIDICULE Did he think it meant only that one instance or only while Carlisle was around to monitor it. How blatantly disrespectful of him to do that. Edward SHOULD rip his arms off!. Charlie can be almost as pushy as Jacob is. Loved the theater. |
JD Thorn chapter 13 . 12/20/2023 The thing I don’t like about Jacob THE MOST is that he’s pushy and obnoxious and doesn’t just take no for an answer. Even went so far as to force himself on her. He was like that in the books and movies and I always wondered why she actually fell for it at the end of Eclipse. Jacob never REALLY had a chance. Remember the line in New Moon. She said, “Jacob, don’t make me choose. Cause it’ll be him. It’s ALWAYS been him.” Even though it wasn’t SAID in the books, that line just about sums up the whole book and movie series. Loving the story so so much. |
JD Thorn chapter 14 . 12/20/2023 It seems that now that she knows the truth about him, their bond has grown infinitely deeper and stronger. That makes me very happy. I am just wondering how they’ll get around Charlie though?! |
Guest chapter 5 . 1/29/2023 Thank you for the mouar. It is greatly appreciated |
shelby3323 chapter 43 . 8/26/2022 Wonderful story. I loved the bond connection between Edward and bella i absolutely adored. |
hellishrose chapter 43 . 5/16/2022 So I sincerely hope that you are still receiving review notifications on the story. I stumbled upon this amazing story recommendation for this story more than a decade after its original publish date. It had been opening my tabs for a bit and I started it on Friday night. I read all 43 chapters over the next 48 hours and as I got to the end I stopped reading because it was so amazing that I didn’t want the story to end. I laughed, I cried, I had some wooow and steamy moments. Absolutely amazing and breathtaking storytelling you did. Thank you for sharing this with the fandom and I sincerely hope that you do get notification of this review as this story brightened my day. It truly is one of my all time favorites. I can say this with all the honesty thank you so very much for all your dedication to this story you can feel just how much a labor of love it was |
butterflygrl0329 chapter 43 . 1/1/2022 This story was so beautifully written and progressed so amazingly and then on top of it so fucking sexy. Then the last 2 outtakes 1 had me crying with emotions and the other one had me crying from laughter you are a brilliant writer I hope you're still writing thank you |