Reviews for The Mating Connection |
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Sarah Nelson chapter 1 . 4/20/2011 awesome beginning to a book! Love It! |
ecullensgurl chapter 4 . 4/19/2011 oh... the story is so cute! This Edward is adorable. I catch myself smiling at this Edward instead of feeling sad for him. LOL |
dabl chapter 4 . 4/19/2011 I like Edward's POV. Waiting for more chapters Great job! |
myworldisblue chapter 4 . 4/19/2011 That's why I don't like to be spoiled. I fear a writers block comes and then we get long time with no update. That's totally why I suggested you to update only one chapter a day. This chapter was also good. Keep going. |
myworldisblue chapter 3 . 4/19/2011 You are doing a good job. The updates just show us that you are really thinking about this story. Keep going. Let them flow. Just a tip: update one each day, it makes us, readers, more anxious for the next, and you keep writing and being several chapters in front of us. It's a good way to go. |
myworldisblue chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 Liked it. Different theme. Must be interesting and good. Good luck. |
SuWi chapter 4 . 4/19/2011 Love this story! Im looking forward to next chapters :) |
sujari6 chapter 4 . 4/19/2011 Great story. |
ilovebdt2012 chapter 4 . 4/19/2011 that isn't cool my first time reading and i have to come into the story where it stops there i want so bad to know what happends next great job on the story can't wait to read the update |
Sammiee31 chapter 4 . 4/19/2011 The idea for this story is great. Keep up the good work! |
sholtsclaw698 chapter 4 . 4/19/2011 loving this story! can't wait to read more! |
sholtsclaw698 chapter 3 . 4/17/2011 its a great story so far! looking forward to more chapters :O) |
ecullensgurl chapter 3 . 4/17/2011 When Edward was talking to Carlisle I think I actually got a lump in my throat. I loved when they met in the classroom and how her scent didn't make him deranged and didn't shy away from her. So different from the hate he felt for her when in the biology lab. You have me hooked and now I will be waiting for you to update both of your stories. LOL |
ecullensgurl chapter 2 . 4/17/2011 Well you have done it again... You have got my attention. Your writing ability is wonderful and I love the concept of this story. I know from the previous story (S Meyer's) how alone Edward was, but you really show how much loneliness he felt and how it even came to him searching the world looking for a mate. It's quite sad when you think about it. Again thank you and on to chap 3. |
ecullensgurl chapter 1 . 4/17/2011 oh... you have definitely have my attention... Sounds very good just from the prologue. On to the next chap :) |