Reviews for A Doll Sleeps
augmentedfourth chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Ooh, I liked this one. The "not-quite lie" was nicely done, and I felt equally bad for Mieu and Miun. I especially liked the part where Mieu considers deleting the memory from her "mind" in order to make her own life easier, but keeps the thoughts of Miun there out of respect. I've always found Miun's story to be one of the more tragic ones in the series, despite its subtlety, and I think you did a good job portraying it here.
Vicious Pink chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Wow, excellent interpretation of Miun's "death" through Mieu. I have to say, it really got to me. Your description of the desert echoed your descriptions of Miun, and that, my friend, is why this is one effectively executed story.