Reviews for NO ESCAPE |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! Loving this story, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No need to worry about Bella/Edward being under the same roof, we need to worry about that crazy ass Jane and her brother. The might try to take her out so Jane can have what she wants. Also I know that Carlisle loves Esme but she would have flipped her shit if she walked in that office when he was rubbing Bella's shoulders. I still don't trust Esme either I think she's jealous of Bella that's why she doesn't want her around. Her issues go deeper then just what everyone thinks. It isn't all about Edward |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great. I would love to get Esme's perspective on the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously, what is Esme's problem with Bella? Is it that she's not part of the business or that he loves her too much? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes indeed. Edward and Bella under the same roof will be intresting. Cant wait to read who is behind everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny, I thought the same thing about Edward and Bella staying at the same place. Esme's pissing me off with the Jane thing, but I get it. I do love that Edward has a Bella tattoo. Riley is a total psycho...I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it keep going can't wait to read the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Riley is a creeper. I wonder where is she going. To Jake's, maybe? I can't wait to read more. Update when you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHHHHHHHHHH UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I hope Edward gets his act together as far as his feelings for Bella or he's going to lose her that way. Looks as if E & B need to talk anyway because they are both targets and need to protect one another. You know I always enjoy every chapter. You've drawn me in since the very first chapter. Good job. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see you are a big Sons of Anarchy fan. Which is great, I am as well but using there season 1 writing and plotline and merging it with Twilight is great, as long as you acknowledge that you have. This story has alot of plagarisim in it and it can be quickly fixed if you would acknowledge the similiarites... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I hope she flees to Edwards house! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well ofcourse riley is behind the shooting on E but weather it was ri or a hired hand i dont know, and i think that bella is either going the the cops (well jake) or heading to the cullens (hopefully) eeppp i love it, its giving my fill of SOA, i'm so excited for the fall for the new season! EEEEEEEPPPPPP! ~BRITTNEY |
![]() ![]() ![]() In glad he's jealous that dumb ass. Hopefully she went to the res with jake. That should be interesting if edward finds out. Oh and I loved that alice layed it down on them about being assholes. |