|Reviews for More Between Us Than A Wall|
| wotumba1 chapter 150 . 9/26
what peter does to finally get some answers! i'm proud of him!
and sylar is quite smart about the whole thing...and they are both keeping it together remarkably well i'd say!
can't help but agree with sylar - nathan was not really one of the good guys
| wotumba1 chapter 149 . 8/28
Wow, what a morning after (talk)!
They were actually quite civil about it all... interesting. .. but I'm getting rather hopeful there. ..
| Yume111 chapter 149 . 8/25
Still reading, still enjoying it immensly. It' s painful and fascinating and touching at the same time., and more emotionally realistic than any story I have ever read
I really like how you handle the sex .
For some reason I kept expecting them finally having sex to be a kind of breakthrough, and of course it wasn't... it ' s more wading in deepening waters instead...which is how life works.
The only real breakthrough there is I suppose is the emotional true connection between two people if and whenever it happens, and even that is transitory in nature... I would love to see them get there at some point
Thanks again for doing this and please keep going!
| wotumba1 chapter 148 . 7/24
It could have been so much worse... interesting waking up in the morning and quite hot too
But that ending... now that doesn't look entirely promising, but not all negative either... interesting
| stormsongwitch chapter 147 . 7/3
Oh man, I can't wait to find out what happens next. That was sexy but I feel sorry for both of them.
| wotumba1 chapter 147 . 7/3
Wow, Peter is really thinking about what his being a petrelli could mean for sylar...
Poor Peter, being so confused about his feelings
And then... they are just so far apart from each other... but sylar backing off at the right moment - that has to mean something
Poor sylar... stressing so much about the time after...
And now? That could go all kinds of wrong from here...
| Lucy chapter 146 . 5/30
Ah. This is wonderful. I don't know how you guys are still managing to keep writing this, but I'm glad you are. Although it certainly doesn't read like any sort of traditional narrative, with the extreme POV exercise and the psychology meaning that almost every little thing is mentioned, and often mentioned twice, you two have managed an astonishing thing in terms of examination of something complex and difficult. I'm impressed, and I really hope you keep doing this for as long as it seems rewarding for both of you, because I'm finding it a very rewarding read. Thank you.
| wotumba1 chapter 146 . 5/25
That reaction was... disappointing I guess...
But I'm truly impressed how they were both able to deal with it. That's quite some growth!
| wotumba1 chapter 145 . 4/19
That conversation did give Peter quite a lot to think about!
Even though it resulted in a fight... and this time it was Peter pushing for it ...
But hey, what an ending!
| Guest chapter 144 . 3/26
Woah, my heart's aching for more. They are so insecure... Both of them... But they seem to be getting somewhere (though I assume there will be another fight soon...)
| wotumba1 chapter 144 . 3/11
It's coming along...
Maybe they should try it with 'less thinking, more doing' ?
| wotumba1 chapter 143 . 2/15
Wow, Peter is really getting a lot better at reading sylar. Congrats!
And it seems like sylar is slowly but surely wearing down peter's defences...
And with that ending here you got me eagerly waiting for the next chapter
| I love it chapter 143 . 2/13
I love it
| Guest chapter 142 . 1/24
| wotumba1 chapter 142 . 1/23
Hmm Peter trying to find a way to understand and make sense of sylar's mind is a hard task. But he does get better at it. And it helps that it seems like sylar is more 'open' in a sense, answering his questions or at least trying to