Reviews for Alone On the Water
DeadlyJellyBaby chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Thank you for this lovely story that has left me in tears. It was beautiful :')
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I cried.
Britt chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Good grief. I've never had a story reduce me to tears within the first paragraph. Very very well written. Is anything else necessary?
someone chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
This was so beautifully written and now I'm crying like a baby because I can't do anything else
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
After the Reichenbach Fall, this is the saddest thing I've ever cried at. I'm still sobbing.

This show WILL be the death of me.
godcomplexLoading chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Ow. Ow. *lies down* That was one of the saddest things I've ever read, but it was also so beautiful and god that it was completely worth it. You, dear, are a lovely artist. That hurt in all the right ways, and I even managed to smile a bit right at the end...
sgniw chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I have never cried so much by reading a fanfic before. I'm sobbing, damn it! I never sob! Such a beautiful story. Very well done!
ccwinchester chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Beautifully written and incredibly sad. I loved it a lot x
SparrowBlaze chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
This was the most beautiful thing I've ever read. I cried for a very long time.
ABBY chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I HATE U
BUT I LOVE YOU
THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING
SAD AS HELL
I CANT
NO
WHYYYYY
MUST READ THIS
U MUST READ
DONT FORGET TISSUES
Me chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Why. WAI. NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE . I'm crying right now. Why would you write such an amazing, beautiful, terrible story? TT
Crying chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
I look into his eyes
I see
compassion, fear...
despise?
Does he despise me
for living while he dies?

No, not despise
Anger
I step back in surprise

"Yes John, I am angry,"
he says, sweeping back his curls
"I can tell you think it's you.
Because your days are unnumbered
and my own are down to two.

"But that is not the reason."
He sighed, staring back at me.

One bright blue eye was focused
and the other could not see.

It had happened earlier today
while walking in the park
he had grabbed me when he stumbled
"My right eye has just gone dark..."

It was then when we both knew
that his tumor found its mark.

"I am angry at myself"
he continued,
"for leaving you alone.
John, you are the only true friend
I have ever known."

Tears threatened my facade
but I couldn't let them spill
instead I watched his nimble fingers
that once had so much skill
one thing this damn brain tumor
had already begun to kill

My pocket was heavy
too heavy
for such a little pill.

"Say something, John"
his hands found my jumper
his voice sounded far away
I could hear his desperation...

But I just sat there hopelessly
There was nothing I could say

Tomorrow he would leave this world
and I would stay

Tomorrow,
on his final day
ForeverMrs.Padfoot chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
This made me cry. Oh god. :'(
It was good...urgh wow.
THANK YOU chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
OMG THIS IS SO SAD I NEVER CRY FOR FANFICTIONS AND I AM BAWLING OMG I CAN'T. THIS IS SUCH A WONDERFUL FANFICTION. SO BEAUTIFULY WRITTEN!
Maggie chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
I just decided to reread this on the most painful day of my period. I am drowning in my own tears.
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